Reviews for The Petite Swan
Bella1283 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
God, another story from you that i love to read!

Your a great writer, go on with this!
fgsfnhrtj chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
loved it!

cant wait for u to write the second chapter!
freeflymore chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
so... when are you posting the new chapters?
crazykatwp chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Ooh. Loved it.
rubell chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
DADDY'S OFFICE! you gotta finish this...and you GOTTA do a part with them in daddy's office!
miska de cat chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
so far. so good
Veronique24 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Love it!
glo4twilight chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
LMAO! that was so funny and she sure did play him i just loved it! it was so well written kept me gripped the whole time and once again you proved yourself with a perfect lemon! can't wait to read more! she literally had him by the balls!haha
GabzR chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
love it
bananahzz chapter 1 . 8/1/2009

Edward got played!
blue-peridot chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
ooh nice. only thing is, they say 'fuck' way too much. doesn't edward have a more expansive vocabulary?
Twilights1Fan chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
m, yummy Edward. I wonder what bottle of perfume he gives to his mom? Will Alice get one too?

Can he put Bella in her place she seems to be playing him still. LOL :OP
amwine chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Wow...that was hot...I can't wait for more!
lulabelljane chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This was insanely hot! Like crazy hot! Bella...quite the firecracker...loved how she got him to spend 1200 on perfume! LOL! Can't wait for the other parts to this story. :)
RebeccaMCullen chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
She got him to spend 1200 in perfume. Lovely.
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