Reviews for The Petite Swan
miska de cat chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
so far. so good
Veronique24 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
Love it!
glo4twilight chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
LMAO! that was so funny and she sure did play him i just loved it! it was so well written kept me gripped the whole time and once again you proved yourself with a perfect lemon! can't wait to read more! she literally had him by the balls!haha
GabzR chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
love it
bananahzz chapter 1 . 8/1/2009

Edward got played!
blue-peridot chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
ooh nice. only thing is, they say 'fuck' way too much. doesn't edward have a more expansive vocabulary?
Twilights1Fan chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
m, yummy Edward. I wonder what bottle of perfume he gives to his mom? Will Alice get one too?

Can he put Bella in her place she seems to be playing him still. LOL :OP
amwine chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Wow...that was hot...I can't wait for more!
lulabelljane chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This was insanely hot! Like crazy hot! Bella...quite the firecracker...loved how she got him to spend 1200 on perfume! LOL! Can't wait for the other parts to this story. :)
RebeccaMCullen chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
She got him to spend 1200 in perfume. Lovely.
mischief-maker1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
OH! HOT SHIT! That was good. DAYUM.
Gaby41791 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
please update soon
SEOrwin chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
This is awesome! I love that she's the boss *giggles*
piratepony chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
great story. loved how bella got edward to buy the perfumes! can't wait for the next part
TeamBedward chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
That was amazing. Brilliantl done. I loved it.
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