|Reviews for The Petite Swan|
| Bella1283 chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
God, another story from you that i love to read!
Your a great writer, go on with this!
| fgsfnhrtj chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
cant wait for u to write the second chapter!
| freeflymore chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
so... when are you posting the new chapters?
| crazykatwp chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Ooh. Loved it.
| rubell chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
DADDY'S OFFICE! you gotta finish this...and you GOTTA do a part with them in daddy's office!
| miska de cat chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
so far. so good
| Veronique24 chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
| glo4twilight chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
LMAO! that was so funny and she sure did play him i just loved it! it was so well written kept me gripped the whole time and once again you proved yourself with a perfect lemon! can't wait to read more! she literally had him by the balls!haha
| GabzR chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
| bananahzz chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Edward got played!
| blue-peridot chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
ooh nice. only thing is, they say 'fuck' way too much. doesn't edward have a more expansive vocabulary?
| Twilights1Fan chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
m, yummy Edward. I wonder what bottle of perfume he gives to his mom? Will Alice get one too?
Can he put Bella in her place she seems to be playing him still. LOL :OP
| amwine chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Wow...that was hot...I can't wait for more!
| lulabelljane chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
This was insanely hot! Like crazy hot! Bella...quite the firecracker...loved how she got him to spend 1200 on perfume! LOL! Can't wait for the other parts to this story. :)
| RebeccaMCullen chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
She got him to spend 1200 in perfume. Lovely.