Reviews for The Petite Swan
Elizabeth223 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Very cute! love to
Sheeijan chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
I LOVE Bella being so in control and confident. That move with the whole perfume thing, ha! But hey, he did buy his mom a present, right? Just a little more pricey than he expected, is all. Then the "I'm ready for my punishment, Sir." Every guy's dream, great mental visual there.

Thanks for writing, I can't wait to see what they do in the lingerie department.
Karleen chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
GUH! You are the Queen of Smut. You have me hooked. *wiggles brows* so sensual! More please? *bats lashes* xx
Brown-eyedCullenGirl chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I loved it. It was amazing. Can't wait for more
azure0610 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Ugh! Hands DOWN you ARE my favorite author when it comes to writing Bella.

You always have Bella strong and independent and that's SO damm rare in fics. People always go canon and bring on the insecure Bella. But no matter the situation, you have Bella strong no matter what.

And THAT will always keep me reading
emomusickid chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
really good chapter i can't wait for the next chapter
noseinabook chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Um, well, damn. Just damn. Incredible one-shot. I have never really found the perfume counter to be an interesting place. Now I have a bit of a different take. Can't wait for the next one...
princess07890 chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
sounds great so far. The lingerie part will def. be exciting!
RKinNY chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
That was hot, can't wait for more.
CourtneyLuvsTwilight chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
OMG. That was...WOW. Can't wait for the next one
AlyxHera chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
No1Longer1using1account chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
freaking love it!
ash902 chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
What is it about a clothing store that has so much sexual tension always? Whatever it is, I really like it!
monkey-101 chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Lol, great chapter.

Can't wait to read the rest of them.

kuntrygal chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Loved it! All kinds of hotness!
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