Reviews for Daddy's Little Girl
DreamingOfASoullessIan chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
I need a tissue. This was soooooo sad! I love it though I loved the ending it was genius!

Keep writing

Nicia chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Haha I've finally gott to a computer to read your stories! But OMG! That was so sad! :'( I actually wanted to cry when I read it, ansd then at the end when Nessie died :'( *sobs* amazing one shot tho! xx
suicidal cow chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
i love the story and song i live how ou twisted the ending, i wish you wouldve stuck to the music video a BIT more anyways i loved it and i always think how lucky i am that my parents arent like that and i get to see my dad every weekend,
twilightermurff26 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
aw it was so sad and so well writen :)
JK5959 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
I liked this. Bittersweet. You save Edward, but we lose Renesmee. Very sad.

Two things, though.

(1) You started off the story in 1986, and Renesmee was 7. That means she would have been born in 1979, not 1990 like the headstone reads.

(2) You wrote "She wasn't supposed to outlive me." I'm confused here b/c I think it may need to be "She was supposed to outlive me." Outlive means to live beyond or longer than.

Anyway, just wanted to let you know. Great one-shot. :D
princess1996 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
the date iz the beginning the story starts on the tombstone it says she was born in 1990
bellaandedwardaddict chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
actually this dosn't confuse me

in the lyrics it said she'd do anything so she does

this is so sad just the song had me crying

I think it was a good idea you didn't kill of Edward
likethestarsthat-shine chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
i swear im about 2 cry!
You-won't-see-an-iguana-here chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
great job. this is really good. i cried... this was a great one shot.
Daddyzwilgurl chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
This was really good. It actually made me cry! Love it!