Love the story

Thousands upon thousands of girls?! I truly don’t think that’s possible at just 17

Totally get you on the team Jacob team Edward thing Taylor Lautner is absolutely gorgeous. But I’m all about team Edward and I don’t know I think he played a really good Jacob. But that’s just me. I actually like Catherine Hardwick I think she did the best job out of all the movies the Collins actually look like vampires pale yes they sparkle and the way the character is supposed to look that’s how it is I don’t like the fact that there’s hairstyles changed from movie to movie like in twilight Esmay had blonde hair like she was supposed to just like I said in the book OK OK Rosalie had platinum blonde hair in twilight but as the movies progressed her hair turned yellow blonde it’s not supposed to be yellow blonde it’s supposed to be platinum blonde almost like white. Alice’s hair was cut very very short and like jaggery from when she was in the asylum but as the movies progressed her hair turned stylish it wasn’t supposed to be like that it was supposed to be Jagde but she and short and then in breaking Dawn part one her hair was in a pixie cut like styled so cute no wasn’t in the right length anymore

Wow, okay not the ending I was expecting, a future epi to show how they were coping with a child or them reflecting on going to uni and struggling throw… or even using Mr M still reflecting how hard they had it. But anyway still good!

Well done!

Oh Alice… mind your business! Grrrrrr!

Another chapter of nothingness! A prediction that set them back, what now… another 10 chapters and then this prediction will come true and they will break up and then what? All of a sudden they will realise they can’t live with out each other but continue to hurt each other for another 5 chapters the a unrealistic get back together and live happy ever after…..

I am enjoying this story…. But it’s dragging and I want to give up…. Flash back, rambling, just tell the story and stop driving it out. We know there is a horrible story… just tell us!

Probably one of the best fics I’ve read in so long. I was completely consumed by this story and I’m so sad it’s over. Great story and great writing!

Great story thanks for sharing .. would have loved one more chapter .. little bit of the future .. have fun

Should have had a longer epilogue
Great story

wow, seriously, written at the age of fifteen? I am completely impressed... Good writing!

I have a q, I have noticed different prases, like Form room?.
Mum? My best friend is English, so I know you must be also. No worries, just wanted. Great story.

eyyyyy
that was soooo nice!
but.. Steph, really?
12 YEARS?!
I've been waiting for this story since forever
and WE WANT THE MASON AND JANE HURRY UP OMIGOSH PLS

Omigosh I'm dying of laughter.. omigosh!
the tub of yoghurt.. *wheezes*

Yes there are other guys reading thisssss
Love your work, and thank you for FINALLY updating!

I've never been on a date.. hope I can go one day!