I don't read much canon, or leave reviews often anymore... but this story was intense. A great story I couldn't step away from. Glad to have found it and given it a chance.

Duet... I Don't Wanna Live Forever from Fifty Shades Darker by Taylor Swift and ZAYN yaaaay

God I hate Alice and Bella for being stupid enough to let her do it. I was actually thinking you were writing Bella to stand up for herself. But a last Bella the push over has shown her ugly head.

Awesome! I would love to read them all.

Loved it! Thanks for sharing!

I was not expecting so much angst. My heart hurts for them.

Lauren is such a tattle tale for being an Instigator.

I had to take home one of those dolls when I was in high school and the high school I work at now does them for certain classes too! Love it!

Here if you pull a fire alarm you get arrested and charged with a felony.

I am so enjoying your story. Sorry I haven't been reviewing much.

I dig it! Off to read more!

Amazing job on this story. It was written beautifully and every moment was so capturing. I loved it. You are an admin writer.

The story was darn good. Enjoyed it thoroughly; though the five-six chapters towards the end just drove me mad because of all the wait we had to do for their reunion. But in the end, everything was resolved fairly.
Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story. :)

Hi, I discovered this story a couple weeks ago. I'm brazilian and I can't help feeling that I've already read this in portuguese. I didn't read all your authors notes, but did some brazilian stole your story?
I was reading in portuguese and was a long time ago and I believe that I have read until this chapter.
Now, about your story, I'm loving it and finally gonna get until the end

Interesting concept