Reviews for One Moment
shallwedance9 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
DEFINITELY GREAT! Are you going to continue? Cause i love it!
Nytd chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
It's nice to see someone expand upon the possibility of what happened after Elizabeth storms out, especially if you ship Walsibeth.

What I would very constructively suggest is having this read by an experienced beta reader familiar with the Elizabeth movies.

While your basic scene is intriguing, you have a fair number of grammatical and especially punctuation errors in this that detract from the flow of the story and make it harder to read.

Beta readers can be infinitely helpful -mine helps tone down my rampant comma usage, and finds a few things that I miss no matter how many times I've proof read something.

I'd love to see this spiffed up and re-posted, as there are very few good fics in this fandom.

Walsingham is a strong and intruiguing character, and I like that you keep him that way even in the presence of the queen.

Have you read Intrepid Bandicoot's 'The Heart of the Leviathan'? Very elegantly written, and a fabulous look at Walsingham. I highly recommend it!

Cheers!

Nytd