Reviews for Author Fighters: The Black Guardians
Mach the Slewfoot chapter 41 . 12/11/2013
Phoenix, Nukid wasn't kidding. You kick butt! Good on ya!

The only criticism I have is that some of the chapters are shorter than necessary. You could combine the parts 1 and 2 to reduce the count to 33 chapters. It's up to you, but it's more efficient.
Inactive ONNMT chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
-Eye brow raise- Interesting.
Sarge Ray chapter 48 . 7/3/2010
That's one adventure down, and the next one is dead ahead.

So, where do ya go from here?
Sarge Ray chapter 47 . 7/3/2010

That was a satisfying battle, beginning to end. It had tons of action and emotional appeal: stuff most fics don't seem to have.
X Prodigy chapter 48 . 6/27/2010
Well that was a truly awesome ending to a truly awesome fic! You should be very proud of yourself Phoenix, cause we certainly are proud of you!

BTW - loved the foreshadowing of H.O.W! '
X Prodigy chapter 47 . 6/27/2010
(Claps) That showed him, love your new ability!
X Prodigy chapter 46 . 6/27/2010
X Prodigy chapter 45 . 6/27/2010
That was brilliantly well written! I loved how you arranged this fight!
X Prodigy chapter 44 . 6/27/2010
Yeah, we kicked some ass!
X Prodigy chapter 43 . 6/27/2010
Nice use of swords! Loved the creativity of this fight!
X Prodigy chapter 42 . 6/27/2010
Those who are cocky agaisnt Ranger, don't live very long
X Prodigy chapter 41 . 6/27/2010
Never figured Hikari for the boxing kind, especially to take down a living castle! Still, great fight!
X Prodigy chapter 40 . 6/27/2010
Never knew Hikari was THAT powerful! Then again, Alexander was always my favoruite summon and if he's a storng as he was in FFVIII - then she's in trouble
X Prodigy chapter 39 . 6/27/2010
Bloody and gritty! The best way to write a fight scene!
X Prodigy chapter 38 . 6/27/2010
That's one dog I would not attempt to house-train! Great portrayal of Dawn's character!
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