Reviews for The Last Night
meelee72 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
That twisted my gut & made my heart hurt.
If it werern't for her horrible father, it wouldn't have happened that way.
So sad, but terribly sweet that they went together, in each other's arms.
BelieveInTheHoundsOfJustice60 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
MyRedvines chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
awww sad '(
I am Thalia daughter of Zeus chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Oh gosh, this story is beautiful. I read it a while ago and nearly cried, it is a heart reanching story and I'm happy to see that Jasper kept his promise to Alice. You shuld be proud of this work and even submit something to other members of your nearby public, even the local paper even.
WL23KRDO chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Oh my god i cant stop crying... this was heartbreaking but really good :'(...
TimahMasenCullen chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
I love this short little story Im literally in least the better place!
MM chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
woohoo. lovely. yeah.
CharliDenae chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
As every review says here, you are an amazing writer. I am so glad that you are still writing! I am looking forward to reading your other stories, especially 'Unsinkable'. Best wishes to you! ;o)
LittlePixieFreak chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
It made me cry -sobs-
Ashley chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
That is the best one ive read so far.
Aerieada chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Heartbreakingly, wonderfully written.
FlapperGirl chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
sobs...can somebody pass a tissue please? oh, just leave the box, thank you. I need my teddy now :(. So beautiful and so sad.
MyKissofDeath chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Dammit Alice! You made me cry!

This was so sad, and so well written. I get exactly how Mary Alice feels in this story. And, although I rarely read Twilight fics, this was amazing. Seriously.

*wipes eyes*
alligatorpie chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
This is completely amazing, it made me cry.
Professor Panda chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
that was amazing...i really don't know what to day its like you seriously captured the whole essence of the song. wow.
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