Reviews for Unarranged Marriage
Peachie-Trishie chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
This story is so good! I wish you would update it!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2012
Really intense
kandita chapter 6 . 10/24/2012
This is fairly a good story...it's a pity unhacent updated in over 3 yrs: (! I'd love to read if Sasuke started to have feelings for the Hyuga and did Itachi find out about them? As well as did he leave the village? Oh! So many what if's
Ninja Queen72 chapter 6 . 3/25/2012
PLEASE CONTINUE
J chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
You should really update this story it is intresting
wallywest chapter 6 . 8/13/2011
This story hasn't been updated in two years. D: Update soon?
The Sky Is Not Always Red chapter 6 . 2/28/2011
Great story.

It's progressing just perfectly. Some would think that the plot is pretty cliche but I don't think so. First off, it isn't an 'arranged marriage' like most things - which would be unrealistic for Sasuke to agree to considering he thinks she is weak. In your story it's perfectly realistic because Hinata is reluctant and Sasuke is oblivious!

Also, I kind of enjoy the subplots aside from Sasuke and Hinata. Like Naruto and Sakura's story is soo sad. It's nice to read for once, someone creating depth for Sakura. She's in love with Naruto but she just made a mistake! Poor Naruto XP Also Nejiten and InoShika! CUUTE!

I like that Sasuke is subtley and slowly beginning to accept Hinata but at the same still stubbon and meeean. And Hinata is slowly beginning to need Sasuke too! :P

I've already told you this buuuut you are SUCH a good writer! Not just content wise but your writing style/format/choice of words is brilliant.

I know you haven't updated this in a long time buuuuut PLEASE try because I'm really into thisZ! Bye for now!
Noir-fan .sorta chapter 6 . 11/11/2010
Please please contiue with this story it's the only one I actually want to finish reading because it makes more sense than some of the other ones.

From the wierdest girl on enternet

Noir-fan...sorta
Miko Uchiha chapter 6 . 10/23/2010
What happened...wheres 7?

I NEED MORE DX
Andreya Halms chapter 6 . 10/4/2010
the beginning of the story wasn't that good, but the ending made up for it. But, i liked your other stories better.
LLL.HINATA.LLL chapter 6 . 7/20/2010
u should update this story its really good
katykat77 chapter 6 . 5/7/2010
OH MY GOD THIS WAS AMAZING THE WHOLE STORY PLEASE UPDATE hi have to tell u at first i was like nah i dont want to read this but once i gave it a chance it was just awsome
Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 6 . 4/18/2010
Sadly, this appears to be discontinued, but I enjoyed it while it lasted. A little silly, but interesting nonetheless.

Keep up the good work!

Angel
Brook Weed chapter 6 . 3/22/2010
I love your writing. :D So I'm putting you on my alert list and faving lots. :3 Yay SasuHina!

Please continue this? It's already 2010! :c
xLittleMissReality chapter 6 . 2/22/2010
I don't care if this is in permanent hiatus! Update! I like it; it's original, really shows Hinata's determination. I'd like to point out like a proud parent that Hinata, even after getting a fatal blow to the heart, stood up and still spoke. Now, as far as I've seen, when other 'stronger' characters from Naruto get a fatal blow like that, they either go to the hospital or get healed by demon chakra. Maybe you can slip that in there, maybe to raise awareness? LOL, anything to get you to update!
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