|Reviews for A Spark of Life|
| iBeta chapter 1 . 8/21
First chapter for me, and I like this story better than your others. The ones you write with different point of views are confusing. Some of them seem to just repeat itself, making it redundant, but this one is better. Less confusing and less repetition of scenes from different POVs.
I like the start of this story! Interesting. It is clear. I don't know what else to add, as I haven't read the other chapters, but I hope the third-person view holds constant. Otherwise, I think I'll just get confused and skip the whole story to find one that is TPV-centric from one of your fics. Shifting POVs is good, I guess, but when you place it in one page, it gets wacky. Try a chapter with a single POV instead of placing it ALL in one chapter.
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/16
Really enjoying the story so far and cant wait for the rest of it :)
| LunarisDraconis chapter 14 . 8/12
I loved it can't wait for more
| Mirage chapter 14 . 8/2
i love when you put up new chapter, i was so happy when i did see tha you had new one up already
hope youre muse gets happy and can write new chapters soon even when they are short like this... so i send you a nice big cake over and other Sweets, to feed the muse:)
i would say poor barricad but i think more happy barricade
but from that what i read it could really be megatron x Harry in the future...i mean megatron can connect as nearly the only one to the allspark to create new things or new bots...and now its Harry...
so you can say more or less Harry can create new bots, energy and maybe there home together with megatron? like mother and father interesting Pairing, but could be really very nice
or will barricade be a third Partner...
will Harry Change forms or can megatron form a human like alt form..
and will dumbledore chock on his lemon drops, and voldi loose his magic to the allspark...or get stepped on by a landing bot
will vernon and dudley get what they deserve...but...they dont have anybody who clean after them and Cooks for them, and both are aggressive so maybe they get naturaly what they deserve...but i think dudley could get on the right path when he gets a kick to the butt and some good bootcamp Training...or soldier Training...
nd dont get me started on umbridge the beast...maybe getting mated to a troll and no Magic anymore, she deserves something nasty and something like this will be the best for her..being a creature that all cant stand and loosing the gift off magic
i really cant wait to read the next chapters, and where this Story really goes... :))
..but when i could ask something like a wish..please Keep People like molly and Ron and ginerva (or ginny) and maybe even hermione away from them...hermione would not understand and when she finds out that human and bots can be together she could not understand atleast i think so as she live after rules and books, and they would drive the bots and soldier up a wall from anger...and this three weasley are no good...and to much goody twoshoes and dumbles Lover-follower...but the other are ok and could be funny like the twins
so here again some nice Sweets to feed your muse
i really like this Story till this Point!
| Bueshang chapter 14 . 7/31
Still an awesome little story.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/30
i love everything about this story so far
| MaidenZorriah chapter 14 . 7/28
Awww Harry's so adorable! No one can escape his cuteness! Hopefully he's kept safe from the government and S7 (the bastards).
| kurokitsune666 chapter 14 . 7/27
This is a very interesting story and I can't wait to read more of it, so please update again soon!
| A'Lee'Ray chapter 14 . 7/26
Love it you need to post the next chapter soon I'm living in suspense!
| Moonshadowcuteness1 chapter 14 . 7/26
Omg yaaay! Can't wait till the next chapter I'm looking forward to it!
| Wufei Winner Quatre K chapter 14 . 7/25
Yay! Harry is so cute even Soundwave can't keep away!
| Nagilover4ever chapter 14 . 7/25
Love it. Update soon.
| Melikalilly chapter 14 . 7/25
I love this story
| Melikalilly chapter 13 . 7/25
I love this story so much
| SagenWarrior chapter 14 . 7/25
Hope to see more