Reviews for Ice Cold Temptation
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
great story
LittleAshes17 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Amazing for your first lemon, too hot!
danni chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
can u please please please send me that edward i need cooling down after that story phew lol love it a lot !
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Good more chapters PLEASE
BabyYuuki1342 chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
for yur first lemon yu did good Me likey
AngelOfDarkness352 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Umm...what was that?

Your story was ok but it clearly isn't something I would put in my fave stories list.

I mean really, there was so many flaws. I didn't like the story almost instantly.

First of all, the story is rushed and made no sense.

Seriously, it's Bella and Edward! They are soulmates and love eachother dearly. I didnt even feel the chemistry between them. It wasnt romantic, it seemed careless.

Trust me, I can go on but I will stop.
KennyFinnster chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
KiNkY is the only way to describe this...u should SO make a sequel!
grandreader chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
damn that was hot ! ;]
KayCie - 2013ECO chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
rip michael jackson
xxKrissiiMayxx chapter 2 . 7/4/2009
I love this, no it's not rushed, no it's not short! Also, i'm new to writing and if you want to read my book, it's called The Darkness, under Vampires! Thx! Loved your story!
Maaikeee chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
Damn hot O_O

keep writing!
Anjel-Eri chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
Yes i am sad too.

but your lemon was good. some people aren't as descriptive.
Cassiopeia7 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
love it 3

it's very sexy too xD
Twilightgirl625 chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
Thank goodness someone feels the same way I do about Michael Jackson! The jokes are getting on my nerves! I haven't listened to any other music besides his since Saturday! He died on my birthday... :(
ktsgran chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
I guess I should have 'read' Chapter 2 before I spoke. But, you still did a great job. Thank you JPL
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