Reviews for Break
JamieDidn'tDieInCulloden chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
A great story. Very well written.
Erzsebeth Bathory chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
I don't really care for Edward, but you really did a wonderful job capturing his personality at this point of the series. Melodramatic, indeed, and it fits the mood! I'm becoming a fan of your writings. Please keep up the good work.
DeEpeR than FaThOmLeSs chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Edward is the most complex character. I think it must be very hard to write anything about him. He takes everything to serious when it comes to protect Bella. While knowing he was going to leave her he doesn't think through the possibilities this tragic break up of theirs would lead to death. His mind works differently then any other character I've read about and I don't know anyone who is just like him. He's one of a kind.

I think you did an amazing job! Even though it was extremely

depressing it was everything you would expect Edward to think and do.
too-old-to-love-jake chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I really liked this take. I find Edward to be the most interesting character.
Katoo chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
TeAroha chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
I enjoyed that, it seemed like it would be something he was thinking if we got told by SM. If you wanted you could do more to NM from his POV. Very well done :)