|Reviews for Our Love Made Mistakes|
| bf142128 chapter 30 . 2/20
This was just the sweetest thing. I loved it. I really did.
| charizardatemymathteacher chapter 11 . 1/20
Mai was craving strawberries now theres a dr. Ichigo.
| kaoru12211991 chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
please explain to me how she got pregnant from her dream? how is that even possible and what's naru going to do when he finds out9especially if it could be his(tins) but close enough) OHMYOD, what's going to happen!
| Lalaith Yamainu chapter 4 . 9/8/2013
Okay, I'm REALLY sorry, the story is good so far but two things:
A blood test CANNOT show whether you've missed a period or not. It CAN show whether you're pregnant or not though, and is far more accurate than urine tests. It does take 24 hours, so they would have done a urine test anyway (pregnancy is the first thing a hospital checks when they admit a female with an unknown illness between the ages of 8 and 80).
Second: In order to get pregnant, Mai would have had to have sex around two weeks before her period (depending on the length of her cycle). You CAN'T get pregnant the day of your period.
Finally, it takes ten days ABSOLUTE MINIMUM after conception for pregnancy symptoms to show up. (Before that your body has no way of knowing it's pregnant, as the fertilized egg is still traveling through the fallopian tube. Hormone's don't start changing until the egg implants).
Put the sex dream two weeks before symptoms start and you're good to go.
Finally, in the first chapter you portrayed the dream as a rape scene (pain, screaming, crying) but in the next chapter you seem to have Mai turned on by the memories. Either remove the rape aspect, or remove the sexual arousal caused by it. At the very, very least, make some sort of point about Mai being confused over arousal when the memory itself was traumatic.
| Valeria Ivy Dragomir chapter 20 . 8/8/2013
SO SAD... :'(
| Iname Kohaki chapter 15 . 7/31/2013
I like the child's name.
| MayMay7 chapter 30 . 6/2/2013
Good enough that I read through to the end and bad enough that a good chunk of the book left me cringeing.
The story line was pretty good. The characters acted weird but thats to be expected in a fanfic.
The baby was much too advanced for her age. She was standing in her crib and crawling at only a month and a half of age. She sould of bairly be able to support herself! Also, everyone kept flinging themselves at Mai when she clearly had a baby in her arms. Thats freaking dangerous! Any mother would be pissed at them for putting the child in danger.
She also fell asleep with the infant on her stomach several times and that a big no-no. What if she rolled over or something?
All in all kudos for keeping my attention. Just try and do a little research or even just use a little more common sense next time?
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/26/2013
I only got up to the 16th chapter, I just can't stand narus unfeeling nature anymore .im sure it improves later on in the fic, but come on Naru u have a baby and ur supposed love wtf! Anyway is a great and detailed story none of the less
| ChristmasEveBrat chapter 18 . 2/18/2013
It's so funny that she fainted. Love it!
| Miss KuroYuki chapter 30 . 2/8/2013
LOVE THE STORY!
| ChristmasEveBrat chapter 16 . 1/10/2013
This is a WONDERFUL NaruxMai story. You captured everyone's personalities perfectly. I'm reading the story again as it is so good.
| Cassie Malfoy97 chapter 15 . 12/30/2012
what does he do!?
| w0nderland5 chapter 30 . 12/2/2012
AAHHH OMG SO EFFING ADORABLE I WANT TO SQUEEZE MEGUMI AND NARU AND MAI ARE SO PERFECT TOGETHER OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. Sorry I got a little carried away...
| uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 30 . 11/3/2012
what a relief ! i thought it's tragic !
| deathglare77 chapter 30 . 10/30/2012
VERY GOOD! The comebacks are very well written! :D