Reviews for Beginning of a New Life
KinkyJAC chapter 21 . 9/1
Epilogue is a little weak but the story I'd solid if a little thin on details.
staar chapter 21 . 8/22
loved it !
PoseidonPrince chapter 21 . 8/12
it's good
keyblademeister88 chapter 21 . 6/11
Well done
Guest chapter 4 . 6/6
the story really is not really bad, but it only show a lot bad mouth about the Goblins. Sure they are banker, but this story show them as something as greedy as the Malforme and that really is stupid. Second the supouse goblin status that you are using in a pervert way is really another stupidity, goblin friend status is a bad way to try to make teh goblins be more friendly but in reality is just somehting used by someotehr writers that lack of brains. At this point this is bad and nothing will make it improve in anyway. third I can understand that Ron has no knowledge of what harry was doing, but Hermione was also on teh same stupid boat of teh weasley and teh rest of moron plus the rapist, that make more stupid the story. That harry has a relation with Daphne do not imply Harry cannot thrust hermione, that is another stupidity from people who simple cannot use the brain or simple cannot has friends if they have a girlfriend.
MargaritaS chapter 21 . 5/17
fantastic story :)
FlowersBite chapter 1 . 3/11
This sounds exciting so far.
Blazeb79 chapter 21 . 2/28
That was a good story. Thanks for writing that
rantingbanshee chapter 21 . 2/15
The first half of this story, I was enjoying the classic gary-sue rhetoric and time traveling cliche which can be a fun read every now and then.

But the second half was not enjoyable at all. The elephant in the room is that you are making Hogwarts out to be a bastion of/ or epitome of quality educational standards which is a load of...'horseshit' largely because Hogwarts quality standards had always been behind. Defense Against the Dark Arts, was always taught by dumb incompetent teachers that couldn't hold the post for more than a year. As a result, educational standards suffered. Divination was taught by a fraud, Potions by a man-child vindictive-terrorist bully (Snape), Transfiguration by a rigid, inflexible old hag who sent 3 defenseless first years into the Forbidden Forest full of dangerous Class-5 magical creatures that could have killed them.

The only teacher that was competent at Hogwarts and could keep up to the standards of quality education that other schools around the world had was the diminutive half-goblin Professor Filius Flitwick. Period.

After being trained by goblins, and attending the prestigious world-class School of Merlin as well as spending years as apprentices for curse-breaking and warding, there is literally nothing that Hogwarts can teach Harry anymore. Literally nothing!

Which brings me to the elephant in the room, you have made Madam Promfrey out to be some gloried epic healer who is superior to any skilled and knowledgeable healer taught at the School of Merlin. That's a large misconception which you have seem to hold Promfrey in a certain pedestral as the best healer around which again is a load of...'horseshit'.

Madam Promfrey is basically a school nurse, with a skill-set consisting of healing common colds and toothaches in a school full of children. There is literally nothing that she can teach Harry or Daphne about healing that the School of Merlin or Apprenticed masters could teach.

More importantly, the time that Harry spent returning to Hogwarts after being trained is a gigantic waste of time because he won't learn anything at Hogwarts. All he is doing is procrastinating and wasting time that could be better spent, hunting down Voldemort and killing him. He has the skills and power to destroy him after all that training but instead, he is healing a mounting pile of injured people when he could be out there in the front lines of the war.

This makes the story awkward and cringe-worthy when we know that Harry is a capable wizard...instead decides to waste time becoming a boring, mundane 'professor assistant', teaching children when he could be ending the war months if not years earlier and ending people's suffering far more quickly by stop procrastinating and floundering about it.

Seriously, do you honestly think that a school nurse could teach Harry what goblins, Master Healers and competent professors at the School of Merlin couldn't teach? All the while wasting time at Hogwarts?
Issei Hyoudou1995 chapter 21 . 1/23
This story is absolutely brilliant. I hope to read more stories just as good, whether from yourself or anyone else. 11/10
hunzbookwyrm chapter 21 . 1/10
Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update
Rebmul chapter 9 . 1/3
the only problem I have with this story so far is daphen is blonde and blue eyed its asotria who is a brunet with dark eyes
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 21 . 12/17/2016
Awesome story here! I loved reading it!
Monster King chapter 21 . 12/12/2016
Good story i really enjoyed it I liked the whole plot and how balanced you kept the character bashing in the story I also liked the choices you made for Harry's lovers and how powerful he got in the story all in all you did a great job.
Cwhit930 chapter 21 . 11/15/2016
Great story. Loved the detail.
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