FUCK the goddamn idiotic moRon, his cunt sister & his cunt mother. You gotta be fucking kidding me! Get that shit fixed because harry is too powerful for that shit to be a reoccurring issue

I'm enjoying this. I'm glad that you seem to have Hermione's genuinely care for Harry & his wellbeing too. Not sure about Ginny. But fuck moRon, that bastard Snape & Oldbus DumbAss.

Wow this story has been so good, thanks for writing a wonderful fic!

It's only the second chapter and already turned idiotic. Can't believe 5 thousand people make it their favourite.

The confrontation at Grimmauld was just painful to read, the dialogue felt so forced.

So far this story is an exposition dump. I am all for world building but most of the first chapters have involved information about how many 'super-cool' advantages Harry has starting off and how much the goblins love him. It seems as if fortune is falling in his lap by the end of chapter one with the failed attack on Privet Drive and the ousting of pFudge so most of the events of OotP are already out the window which isn't a bad thing but I hope Harry doesn't cruise through the story on the gravy train with biscuit wheels.

I've read make a Wish and the reason that story works so well is because it is freaking hilarious and this one does not have that going for it so far. I am already disappointed that Wormtail was captured so early because one of my favorite parts of that story was all of the misfortune Peter suffered trying to capture Mister Black.

So far this story is an exposition dump. I am all for world building but most of the first chapters have involved information about how many 'super-cool' advantages Harry has starting off and how much the goblins love him. It seems as if fortune is falling in his lap by the end of chapter one with the failed attack on Privet Drive and the ousting of pFudge so most of the events of OotP are already out the window which isn't a bad thing but I hope Harry doesn't cruise through the story on the gravy train with biscuit wheels.

I've read make a Wish and the reason that story works so well is because it is freaking hilarious and this one does not have that going for it so far. I am already disappointed that Wormtail was captured so early because one of my favorite parts of that story was all of the misfortune Peter suffered trying to capture Mister Black.

Im going to be honest. This is terrible writing ajd a terrible idea.

This makes no sense. Best fighters but they casually wait for injured people during a fight.

Interesting story, but so many gut churning stupidities in one place is a bit disturbing...
He faces 20 DEs, including Bellatrix no problem yet is afraid of annoying Daphne? Tell the bitch to go sleep on the couch in the suite, or on the bloody floor - and tell her to loose the bitch attitude... he's helping her! Send her back, trying to work with a bitch doesn't work - ever!
I've read thousands of HP fic's - you are now in first place for biggest pussy Harry ever...

This was a fascinating story and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. There were a few moments of confusion after Harry and Daphne returned to there original time and Hogwarts. However all that was eventually cleared up, most of it during the Healer's Hell chapter. I think the only things that really disappointed me was how quickly some things moved and how little we actually saw Harry and Daphne use their training. The Healer's Hell chapter and the ones that followed it were some of my favorites because we actually got to see some of what they could do. Also it was disappointing that we didn't get to see much of their romance. It was there but it really felt like it was mostly skimmed over and remained in the background. We also saw little of their relationships with their friends/family. All of that was included in the story but it was condensed and felt lost amongst all the stuff going on due to their training and the war. At any rate, it was still a wonderful story and I did enjoy it. This was a version of the time travel trope I hadn't seen before and hope to see again.

So far this is a brilliant story. However, aspects of this chapter have me puzzled. Why are they talking about Harry getting Masteries in subjects he already has Masteries in? I know not all the teachers are aware of this but Aberforth and Minerva are. Is he even being taught things he doesn't know? Is all this just refresher for him? Will he have to get the certification again for his true identity?

I don't know if anyone has mentioned it yet but at the beginning of this chapter (3) Daphne's alt name switches from Sarah to Rose in the same conversation.

I think you just use a bunch of words without actually really knowing what they mean. You’re also making your OC Harry do a bunch of unnecessary shit just cause it sounds cool to you. You set him up in the first chapter to be a guy who won’t take shit from anybody ever again only to be a little bitch in the next chapter. My first read through of this story was bearable, but now that I’m reading it again it’s painful so I’m dropping it before I waste anymore time on a subpar story masquerading as a decent read.

This is the second time I read this story from start to finish.
To all those that critic this story to be not of their liking, Though shit.
Every Fan Fiction starts with a What If? What if Harry wizened up? What if Dumbledore trains him? and thousands more.
If you can not cope with that, there are always the original books you can read.
Each Fan Fiction is a world on its own, Canon has its own world, and there is no comparison between them.