|Reviews for Child of Hate, Samurai of Fate|
| jtscores chapter 21 . 1/11
Finally, he's out. I guess that now it's going to drift even further from the original plot timeline, that's awesome. Can't wait to see these prophecies (wtf was with those lol) come about. Or maybe they are broken? Excited to read more, I am.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/14/2017
Just read chap 9 enjoying the story so far but would like to point out naruto means either fishcake or maelstrom not uzumaki, uzumaki means eddy or whirlpool
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2017
i hope your life is shitter than your fanfic
| GodAlvirus chapter 3 . 7/10/2017
No, Samurai don't rule anymore, they rulED_-
| MagnusDeluca chapter 21 . 7/10/2017
ok my thoughts on the story so far. Story wise, i love it, even more so the long distance relationship with Fem Haku, and the fact that you make it clear that Samurai and Shinobi do not use the same skills, i honestly would have left if you had him know some shinobi skills outside of the ones he was taught in the academy, so im happy for that. now for weapons, so far you have the traditional Daisho set which is the Katana and Wakashi, and the Kumi bow. those are all traditional Samurai weaponry but the others you derided naruto to learn are very unorthodox for any samurai, as most weapons he has learned are more suited as Shinobi weapons. I would very much like to talk with you further about this subject if you wouldn't mind. now for structure wise of the story, I did see a few spelling errors and grammar errors through out the story, but that is expected in any story not done to be published into a book. Aside form that, all in all, i am greatly enjoying this story, and i hope to see it to its end. and as a last note, do try to ignore the negative nancys who dont even bother to give a story a few chapters a chance
| cheekypig56 chapter 21 . 11/30/2016
bloody well done continue pls
| cabbieforhire chapter 6 . 5/30/2016
I was really into this until I saw your reply to a review and you said that he's going to be in a triad relationship with OCs and that there were going to be flings along the way. Nothing against the rest of the story but I can't stand when there's a bunch of casual sex that has no bearing on the plot and makes even more changes to a character. I can't see this Naruto or canon Naruto taking time away from his training for meaningless flings. Plus, I've never been a fan of OC romance in mediums with tons of characters to choose from.
| D chapter 9 . 5/26/2016
read a bit honestly didnt like it. some decisions were good while others were horrible. one part of the bad was the sword giving. It not only didnt make sense but simply gave him skills, strength and experience. honestly I thought for a minute he might just get the sharingan eyes or maybe the rinnegan along with every skill imaginable. Good decisions were realizing that samurai and shinobi are different. Bad decision with that would be assuming that a samurai needed more skill to face a shinobi of lesser skill. After all; if it took 3 times more skill to defeat a shinobi than the shinobi himself had; who would ever decide to be a samurai? Just a few points on what killed the story for me.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/25/2016
The talking sword shit is annoying.
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
This is a flame i'm too lazy to even write
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/12/2015
This story started out good until like halfway through the first chapter then naruto got all ooc and the story went to shit, fuck this story and fuck you
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
You are a loser.
| yindragonkiba chapter 21 . 2/25/2015
| Amberwish chapter 21 . 1/20/2015
| Tistori Isbulshe chapter 2 . 1/14/2015
Interesting idea, but bullshit execution... sorry. There is AU and then there is giving your OC the name Naruto - and not giving any reason for why this OC should be considered Naruto.
Why is he "smarter"? Why is he so damn polite? Why does he know about the Fox? Etc.
So yeah - still really nice idea.