|Reviews for Happily ever after M and F|
| sol y luna 0428 chapter 1 . 8/7
gracias yo también hubiera hecho un final así
| Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Great story! How it should have ended! Wonderful job done!
| Reading Books at Midnight chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
That was amazing! Very very good. Thanku so nuch for giving poor Abberline and Mary thr best endIng. Johnny Depp was perfect in that movie as u said. This rlly made my day D. Keep up the writing, ur rlly good at it
| word fodder chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Love Johnny Depp and this was one of my favorite movies, so to have it have a happy ending awsome! very beleivable, I wish the movie had ended like this.
| Wicked R chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
| BookwormAvey chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
This is a much better ending! I love it!
| shadowsamurai83 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
That would have been a great ending to the film, and believable as well. But at least you wrote this story for us to enjoy. Thanks. :)
| TheConspiracyTheory chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
aww damn, nice work, That was a nice continuation/ending :D
| marri chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
this was a really great re-edited ending
I wish the movie really ended like this
| she fuels the fire chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
I'm not logged into my account, so this review is apparently "unverified".
Anyway, YAY! A HAPPY ENDING! I usually don't like horror movies, but I do love Johnny Depp, and I actually liked this movie. Until the end. I was like, "No! Abberline! How could you?"
So, thank you, for this happy ending. It just made my day.
| Jukebox Lovechild chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I so agree - this ending would have been brilliant. I like your writing, although you change between past and present tense several times, which interrupts the flow of the story a little. But in all, really lovely. I especially like the fact that you had Abberline undergo several name-changes, and had him wait so long to go to Mary, it was realistic - he'd want to make well and truly sure that he wasn't being followed.
| capitaine soffye chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
loved it, just how it was meant to be!