Reviews for Koyomi Discovers Vampire Kisses
Retorisk chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
I can see this being a great story in the future, save for a few glaring spelling errors. Specifically, hour was misspelled as "our," and Tomoka's name was misspelled as "Tamoka." You also had Tomoka calling herself Tomoka, when I believe she either speaks in first person, or just calls herself "Tomo." If those get fixed, then I'd not only favorite the story, but I'd also follow the author.
Wild-Child3D chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Cliffhangers. Man, i hate those
Shazzar chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
were you advertising for Vampire Kisses? The story is okay but it just felt like a commercial.
quamp chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
It has a lot of promise but a few problems as well.

It's out of character for Kirie to be dating Kosame. If you'll recall in the anime Kosame hit on Kirie and Kirie was revolted for it. I also think it's out of character for Koyomi to desire reading about vampires.
hankpym chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I loved this story! And its great that Kosame and Kirie arwe dating ;)! Plese add more quickly!
Twisteddarkness225 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
not bad, but maybe make the chapters a little longer. other than that, good job and i look forward to more.