Reviews for Hummingbird
LockBox22 chapter 14 . 12/29/2010
even though your story was very well written, easy to follow and had a good plot line, it still felt like Lucy stole the show.
zotlot chapter 14 . 7/24/2009
Aw, lovely ending. One question still needs to be answered though: how did Lucy know how to do all that stuff?
Wikkid X chapter 14 . 7/1/2009
Yeah, I BETA'd this so you know what I think anyway, but... I love this story because of its fast-paced, TV style action, completely believable dialogue and wonderful characterisation. You dragged me along. Lucy is a wonderful character, but you made characters from the fandom do their work too - and I really got into it even though I've never seen The Unit, which is great. Nice work, thanks for letting me BETA! xx
parmakai66 chapter 14 . 6/30/2009
cute story ... I love Bob.
S.L Ward chapter 11 . 6/28/2009
Love it! Really great plot, the action is fab! Please write more soon!