Reviews for Steel
annieliyukon chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
This was very sweet
AroggantIgnorant045 chapter 1 . 8/11/2017
how could this be so good
Ravengal101 chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
This was a pretty good story. The descriptions were well done and you brought across the emotional turmoil Tenten endured very well. However, I found the conversations listless, occasionally cliche and flat out awkward...I understand that most of these convos were meant to be awkward but, at the same time, I just couldn't picture an exchange occurring like that between Neji and Tenten.
CoraIM chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Absolutely beautiful - Your writing is marvelously eloquent and elegant.
Lili Bibi chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Perfect in every way! Luv it!
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Loved it!

Keep writing!

Kyrie Twilight chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Love love love.
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Very nice fic. :)
taydev chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Wow! This was sexy, angsty, tasteful and well written. I think you captured the characters well and how they'd respond to those feelings. Very nice.
silverstargazer chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
It's good to view a NejiTen story out of the stereotypical(sp?) plots out there. Keep it uuuuuuup!
LonelyAsura chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
So beautiful 3
OSYH chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful. I honestly can't write anymore about how much I loved the way you painted Neji and Tenten, and how their relationship developed, and how they confessed to each other at the end. A lovely fic.
sanriochica333 chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Beauitul. I will say the angst tag somewhat worried me. I was afraid that he was in fact using her for practice. Anyway, I enjoyed this I'm glad it all worked out in the end. I just thought it was sad that someone would be afraid to broach a subject with someone they were intimate with for fear of them leaving. :( That is no way to feel with someone you have sex with.
een nihc chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Lovely image of the last line. Tenten's insecurities and all is potrayed very well. I thoroughly enjoy the girl talk she shared with her friends. And Neji's confession is endearing. Being Neji, I don't think he'll ever confess his love in the conventional way.I'm glad I found this gem.
Lady Callista chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I liked this story for the most part. Some of your imagery was just amazing, and this felt pretty IC for them. Although the way you bounced around between scenes was a little hard to understand at times, I still enjoyed the story.
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