Reviews for The Incredible Shrinking Jack
goldacharmed chapter 11 . 4/23/2014
Please don't give up on this story, I know it's been a while but I love it!
I'm Nova chapter 11 . 7/27/2012
I like this story, very much.

The only thing that has me doubtful is: if this is Jack just with less empty spaces inside, shouldn't his body weight stay the same in his compressed form, making it a feat to carry him around? Or I'm confusing body cells and molecules...perhaps you're right, and the nothing-in-between-our molecules actually contributes to our weight? I always get confused when I have to shift from cellular to atomic level...

And I'm worried sick Jack genes are kinda accepting it already: otherwise Martha killing him shouldn't reset the compression too?

Not to mention Martha behaving all suspiciously: come on nightingale! You can't seriously betray Jack! Ok, I understood she's not doing it with malicious intent, and she's a bright girl, improbable she could be tricked...oh well. I'll have to trust her and you, I guess. One thing's for sure: if Jack ends up taken away by Martha's accomplice or something equally bad, they'll have to face a pissed off Welshman. Remember during the whole Gray fail what he said to Hart: "I'll kill you ". Not that I think he could do that to Martha, never knows...
I have a hunch Jack never picks his lover too sane. Or they go insane because of being with him, who knows...
Sunni Praestans chapter 11 . 1/28/2010
Another good one! Except I keep on thinking of a chibi Doctor I saw on deviantART instead of Jack...
Larkaidikalikani chapter 10 . 9/26/2009
Larkaidikalikani chapter 11 . 9/26/2009
no! Jack!
Larkaidikalikani chapter 3 . 9/26/2009
Yay! I love the story, but the whole Larkian thing is a little ironic considering my username
Turquoise.ebonyfox chapter 11 . 8/22/2009
Oh no! Poor Jack! {:O That would suck if they really couldn't reverse it. Jack is already being put down for his minute, (not time-minute, the other one that looks the same that is pronounced different, referring to size), size. Though, they say that things get darkest before the light of dawn, (or something like that), or um. . .how do I put this? . . . sometimes things will get worse before they get better, (yep, that sounds clear enough). Thank you for the update, it seems like a long time since you last updated, but that's okay. I get writer's block sometimes, too, (it really sucks) as well as drawer's block. . .erm, I mean artist's block, I think, (I love to draw as well -). Don't worry so much about time when it comes to that. Well, I whenever I get that way, I just put it to the side for a little while. I'm sure that you'll get back on track, just let it run like the wind, (if that doesn't confuse you or sound stupid). I'll wait patiently though still eager for the next update. -

Well, have fun and don't force it, (I'm not saying that you are, but I thought that I'd give that piece of advice because I sorta tend to do that)

Murderbynuns chapter 11 . 8/21/2009
nice ending but a bit short can't wait for more
Manu4380 chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
I just found this story. I'm all for funny stories and I loved Ianto's line “Look on the bright side Jack; I’m pretty sure Barbie dumped Ken.” xD

I'm going to read the other chapters now.
Turquoise.ebonyfox chapter 9 . 7/31/2009
Thanks for the update! :) I can't wait for the next though, (it was kinda short, though still quite humorous). I still don't blame Gwen for being quite amused with this "little" conundrum, but now I sorta feel a little sorry for Jack. As for your poll, (I was confused at first with the beginning of the new chapter, wondering what you meant by that! XD ) I suppose that it would depend on how the story goes. When it comes to movies or stories, most of the time, (in my opinion) the first one is usually good enough. However, this story maybe different. If you don't mind, I think I will wait for the story to end to see what I think. :)
Turquoise.ebonyfox chapter 2 . 7/30/2009
Wow! XD Jack is making a fuss over his "little" problem! Though, I find it sad that Martha would betray them. :( Oh well, good luck! :D
bbmcowgirl chapter 8 . 7/29/2009
Just voted. Looks like we all love Ianto best. But what do you mean 'if I finish'. You have to finish (please). Cute as he is, we really can't leave Jack as a ken doll for an eternity.

Elanor16 chapter 5 . 6/27/2009

Poor Jack...

*tries to keep a straight face*

doctor-who-fangirl chapter 5 . 6/27/2009
Sorry! I haven't had time to review this at all, but I put it on alert and have been reading it. I just want to say that I think this is absolutely hilarious, and tiny Jack is so CUTE. I love it! Keep up the good work.
jayni-guardian chapter 5 . 6/27/2009
aaw! mini jack! poor Jack, though. Still, I'm sure he can cope!

Great going so far! Can't wait for the next part!
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