|Reviews for Scorpion's Disciple|
| Zsombi chapter 15 . 2/21
If every writer who is or likely is abandoning their story would do at least this much if not just a simple warning would be great.
After reading this and a few ch. here and there I got enough of the plot to not "waste" more than an hour or so on an unfinished abandoned story.
I like reading books, which are self contained stories with start and end sufficiently independent of others (incl. prequels /sequels) that they are easily understood & read. I read mostly finished works so, thanks for posting some kind of closing.
| Dark God Vecta chapter 4 . 2/10
I've been liking your character choices so far, but this? NAH. I hate anko
| Dark God Vecta chapter 3 . 2/10
so you're basically giving naruto sakura's character arc but better
| iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 12/1/2020
Uhm uno scherzo molto interresante!
Sassori che si reca a Konoha e li conosce Naruto! Qui la si mette male per tutti anche perché un Naruto adesstrato da un ninja temo che porterà guai!
| ManticoreBlues chapter 15 . 11/5/2020
if anyone or even multiple people think there competent enough do finish this fanfiction in a manner that matches the beginning of the fanfiction or basically rewrite this in your own but somewhat similar way please do so and message me that your doing so. this fanfiction is so fucking good and the fact that it's abandoned makes my heart hurt
| ManticoreBlues chapter 14 . 11/5/2020
a good way to kill of Hinata, I'll be honest I'm glad you did killer her off, I've never liked the naruto x Hinata pairing
| Okami2312 chapter 15 . 10/25/2020
I hate and love you.
This story was amazing some flaws would be Naruto’s progression being a little too fast near the end but..god why fod you have to abandon it I know how you feel and I understand that but man im selfish I wanted that end.
You did a great work and it will stay as one of my favorite, of you ever randomly get a burst of creativity and write the final chapter then do it for us please.
| JustDusty chapter 14 . 10/18/2020
aaaah no no no don't do that. You've established that Naruto is pragmatic, you can't do a one eighty and turn him into an emotional landmine just so you could have him easily manipulated
| JustDusty chapter 2 . 10/18/2020
Holy shit. I can't believe how many times i overlooked this gem. I am such a goddamn moron. How could i have missed a story like this?
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2020
Thats why i hate team 7. The dynamics of that team! So you get your hand burned by your teammate and blamed for it by your other teammate, and yet you still extend your hands for friendship the next moment.
Man what a sour loser he is.
And how many time are you gonna make us read about the life of one uzumaki naruto over and over again as he narrates it to every character who ask a simple question to him
| amiahgray6 chapter 9 . 9/29/2020
How TF did zabuza defeat hidan
| amiahgray6 chapter 6 . 9/29/2020
Naruto a fucking idiot to still have sakura hitting him like that or maybe the author is just like maschoistic things like that
| amiahgray6 chapter 4 . 9/14/2020
Yea I'ma have to drop this one really don't like Hinata as a character so yeah it was a great story tho
| Marcas Dammin chapter 3 . 7/22/2020
I like the story but I will point out that the Yondaime never really created anything just copied and improved or dumbed down stuff. For example eight trigram seals, shika fuin, and Hirashin were created by others he just either improved and/or combined them together. Rasengan is nothing more than a ripe-off version tailed beast bomb which is probably just a rasengan with yin and yang release incorpated into them
| JustaLonelyGuy chapter 15 . 7/7/2020
Superb, awesome, amazing story! One of the best Naruto stories out there! Well explored concepts; realistic, believable development; absolutely loved your Sasori, Kabuto n Naruto interactions! ABSOLUTELY loved your Kabuto as Sasori's “lackey” instead of Orochimaru's hehehe... unusual? yeah, «a surprise to be sure but a welcome one» hehehehehe Well done, u should write more stories 3