Reviews for Scorpion's Disciple
thevassago chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Wow, this is a really good story. I really enjoy the character development of Naruto. Right now this story is a bit unknown but if you continue regularly update, you will have lots of reviews. Keep up the good work! Update soon.
daimyosam2 chapter 3 . 6/26/2009
truly superb, great work

update soon

ps- why has the hokage not noticed wait, i take that back. you said in an earlier chapter that no one knew what sasori looked like or something to that affect.

pss- if naruto was completly cut off from the kyuubi, would he suffer a withdrawal like someone who is addicted to a drug?
Ninja Magic chapter 3 . 6/26/2009
You have a truly excellent story with a very interesting storyline. I look forward to reading more of your writing.
flamingmagnum chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
This is very impressive, I am surprised that you published this all in one day. I love Naruto puppet master stories so keep up the good work.
CrystalCipher chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
I like it! :D
Darksnider05 chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
This needs to be reviewed hardcore, there's actual character growth how rare. Jesus this is just stacking up to be epic though I think you need to work on Naruto making more friends possibly just talking to Hinata a bit... or something I don't know but it will be interesting watching you add people to Naruto's social interactions.

So many things could happen hm curious how good Naruto will be by Graduation and who his team will be.
taintedlegacy chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
Nice story! Keep up the good work and update soon!
emperor-soul chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
very nice.

i really like how you took the now old idea of a puppet using naruto and made it seem fresh and new.
FateBurn chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
well... damn man that the best Sasori trains Naruto story I have found in soo far its realy interesting how you made all the characters interact and how in dept you explain the dinamics and inards of the art of puppetering, cant wait to see how this gonna turn out, only one question is there gonna be any pairing for Naruto and if so who, I just hope you use someone not normaly used hope you update soon.
Lord Blood chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
wow that was very good. very in depth about puppetry, sealing, and all of naruto's training. there are very few stories that truly do that, and all of em turn out to be excellent stories. i'm sure that this is heading that way as well.

this is probably the first sasori-teaches-naruto story that didn't involve sasori taking naruto away from konoha to train him or something. i like it. thumbs up!
Revenantzero chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
Is this your first fanfic or have you written more? If so, tell me were I can find them. You real talent, keep up the good work.
Carumati chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
I fucking love you, this is the most awesomest fic eva! And if you continue this fic with regular updates, I'll love you more. The friendship with Shino was out of the blue and totally original! I see that there's no pairings, and that's ok with me, I'm not encouraging any romance at this point . Do you have anyone in mind?

PS- When will Naruto crack out a Bingo book?
kyuubi shadow chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
go sasori!
Vampirenote13 chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
I'm already in love with this story. It has a good plot idea, it explains everything, and it's just a fun idea. Please, update soon, it's really good :D
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