Disappointed in the supposed ending, given that Sasuke not being hunted down despite his defection and attempted murder, that only by way of deus ex machina didn't result in any casualties, was an example of canon hogwash, and this fic was much more realistic. Again, we are operating in a context where missin nins are hunted down for stealing the Sealing Scroll or the Nidaime's sword.

I hope his outfit changes. Kishimoto’s characterization of Naruto was so damned toxic. That love of orange always disgusted me. Idgaf what people say. “He isn’t Naruto if he isn’t loud, annoying, stupid, and obsessed with orange!” Fuck it, I’ll take an OC named Naruto than Kishimoto’s abomination named Naruto.

His really Sasori's disciple

ah fuc TT_TT just commented on the prev chapter and this had to happen. I'm really heartbroken TT_TT it was too good to be true, i should've known. what kind of great quality fic finishes in 15 chapt despite the massive individual chapters TT_TT

Damn if this isn't an hectic chapter with an hectic end. Thumbs up for the Hinata move, thought she'd be saved magically. Dang finished this fic of 120k words in 2d...I'm getting old :p

Dang quite the interesting beginning you got here. looking forward to more :p

I respect that you didn’t feel up for finishing this. The summary was good enough for me though

Excellent chapter and fantastic results

Excellent chapter, and Hinata kinda shoulda seen that coming when she provoked him

Excellent developments! Truly a masterpiece

Fantastic work and excellent that Gaara has arrived

What a thrilling and excellent chapter

Fantastic ending to Wave! Excellent end of Hidan and Kakazu

Excellent chapter and fantastic handling of Wave

Interesting turn of events. Quite a fascinating chapter