Reviews for Scorpion's Disciple
Lord Vaserious chapter 6 . 1/15/2022
Fantastic developments and stellar twists and turns
Lord Vaserious chapter 5 . 1/15/2022
Excellent chapter and fantastic results
Lord Vaserious chapter 4 . 1/14/2022
Excellent chapter and fantastic results
Lord Vaserious chapter 3 . 1/13/2022
Excellent chapter and fantastic detail
Lord Vaserious chapter 2 . 1/13/2022
Naruto’s life is going so great and then he got that bombshell. Excellent chapter
Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 1/12/2022
This is an excellent premise and an even better story
Username6166 chapter 2 . 5/31/2021
500 ryo in Naruto's universe is 5000 yen, which equals around $45. Naruto's getting scammed for 45 bucks a month.
MangekyouSharingan1234 chapter 13 . 5/25/2021
you killed her... your a monster
Jondoe0321 chapter 13 . 4/22/2021
Guest chapter 15 . 4/4/2021
Great story, thank you!
Zsombi chapter 15 . 2/21/2021
If every writer who is or likely is abandoning their story would do at least this much if not just a simple warning would be great.

After reading this and a few ch. here and there I got enough of the plot to not "waste" more than an hour or so on an unfinished abandoned story.

I like reading books, which are self contained stories with start and end sufficiently independent of others (incl. prequels /sequels) that they are easily understood & read. I read mostly finished works so, thanks for posting some kind of closing.
RikK1 chapter 4 . 2/10/2021
I've been liking your character choices so far, but this? NAH. I hate anko
RikK1 chapter 3 . 2/10/2021
so you're basically giving naruto sakura's character arc but better
iacopo.passerini chapter 1 . 12/1/2020
Uhm uno scherzo molto interresante!
Sassori che si reca a Konoha e li conosce Naruto! Qui la si mette male per tutti anche perché un Naruto adesstrato da un ninja temo che porterà guai!
ManticoreBlues chapter 15 . 11/5/2020
if anyone or even multiple people think there competent enough do finish this fanfiction in a manner that matches the beginning of the fanfiction or basically rewrite this in your own but somewhat similar way please do so and message me that your doing so. this fanfiction is so fucking good and the fact that it's abandoned makes my heart hurt
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