|Reviews for Broken|
| Eliza-00 chapter 2 . 11/26/2013
I like it interesting
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
I've only read up to the second chapter and I love the story! c: -Shall continue reading now-
| RogueSama chapter 6 . 3/1/2011
one suggestion, when you change characters try either using a different POV or something else too make the two different people's veiwpoints more distinct... It gets confusing when you are still using "I" but the character has switched.
| Murasaki Argenteria chapter 13 . 2/20/2011
*pout* Why aren't you updating the older ones first? *grumble*
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 13 . 12/26/2010
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON! ... kk, that was all I had to say really ... Luv the story, possibly will die if you don't end up continuing it soon ...
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 12 . 12/26/2010
This chapter was better about putting breaks telling you that something happened between the two paragraphs. Thank you, and please continue writing! I luv the story!
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 11 . 12/26/2010
POV switching again. So confusing... I promise to keep reading though! I would enjoy it if you would try to go back and fix it though.
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 9 . 12/26/2010
POV changing without being identified! Please work on fixing this soon!
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 8 . 12/26/2010
More of the POV switching with no cue! GRR! Don't worry I won't stop reading the story, I luv it too much to do that!
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 6 . 12/26/2010
So, I'm just going to keep reminding/nagging you about telling us where the POV changes. Every chapter it happens, expect me to give a review. And, of course, when you update a new chapter! I luv the story, honestly! It's just majorly confusing trying to figure out who's POV it is when it changes especially cuz it makes no sense when they're changing. Keep writing!
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 5 . 12/26/2010
Like i just said, more of the identifying where POV changes. Still, a good story nonetheless.
| AliceMarieSwan chapter 4 . 12/26/2010
I'm thinking Aido, or Kain. But I really think you should work on identifying where the POVs switch between characters.
| Princess-Lazy-Chan chapter 13 . 8/31/2010
hey lol i wont be deleting you off subscription ] can't wait untill you do up date though ] good luck
| starry123 chapter 5 . 6/3/2010
u said it was someone we least expected it to be
so the only blue-eyed bloodsuckers there are is shiki or aidou
| starry123 chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
nice first chap