Reviews for Optimus Prime's Daughter
Guest chapter 3 . 9/10
You should write more chapter.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/2
The storry is so perfect!
Transformers1212 chapter 22 . 8/31
Great I love it ! Please do more and yay there getting longer!
Firebenderwolf chapter 22 . 2/1
Please please please post more! I love this story.
Guest chapter 22 . 1/17
Despite that one swear word, no offense to anyone, it was really good. Something is up and Optimus or someone will pay with their life. Maybe Ratchet missed something important.
Guest chapter 21 . 1/16
Cute how they finally admitted their love. Keep it up.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/14
I like the story. Please continue with it when you find the time.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/14
Awe squish. Love the fluff in it. Now Megatron is planning to kill his brother. I just know it. I mean Optimus would do anything to make sure that his daughter is safe. Great job. Update soon.
Allyp098 chapter 20 . 1/14
You have to update. Oh my gosh. I was at the edge of my seat! Nice job
Nightcore chapter 19 . 6/27/2015
Love it!
next chapter have more bee 3 star. Sry but I love what u r doing this was the first fan fiction I read. And I loved it. Yeah, more bee and starlight please thnks
BlueStar19 chapter 19 . 6/25/2015
It was really great. I still haven't figured out where you got the name from. Is it from White Zombie from when I looked it up? I'm not sure though. But he will pay dearly for what he has done. I just know it. But then again there is my one idea I suggested. Forget what it was though.
Guest chapter 18 . 6/17/2015
Make more I say MORE!
BlueStar19 chapter 18 . 7/10/2014
That was just what I was thinking last night. I guess it's just deja vu. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the great work my friend. If you need more ideas, come and get my help.
Starlight Prime chapter 12 . 7/7/2014
Poor little HotShot...
Starlight Prime chapter 11 . 7/7/2014
Oh no!*cries* Poor Optimus!
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