Reviews for Optimus Prime's Daughter
BlueStar19 chapter 18 . 7/10/2014
That was just what I was thinking last night. I guess it's just deja vu. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the great work my friend. If you need more ideas, come and get my help.
Starlight Prime chapter 12 . 7/7/2014
Poor little HotShot...
Starlight Prime chapter 11 . 7/7/2014
Oh no!*cries* Poor Optimus!
Starlight Prime chapter 5 . 7/7/2014
Awesome! The femmie has my name! XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
murisa872 chapter 17 . 7/3/2014
Please continue, amazing story 333
BlueStar19 chapter 17 . 6/6/2014
I have writer's block a lot while writing my transformers books. I have an idea of what you should do next. You should have Optimus take Bumblebee and Starlight to the medical bay and be repaired. As the leader of the Autobots, Optimus should ban Black Sunshine. The banished Autobot should go to Megatron and be a Decepticon. Starlight is captured by Black Sunshine and Optimus goes to rescue her. Optimus has to then fight Megatron, Black Sunshine, and three other Decepticons just to protect his daughter. He is critically damaged and begins to flat line. Ratchet and Red Alert tried to save Optimus, but nothing worked. Starlight runs over to her father and cries over her loss. Optimus was left in the room. She mourns over her father's death. Optimus is brought back to life thanks to a mysterious person. Starlight is at home alone crying. Optimus comes home and hugs his daughter. Starlight looks to see her father there. She is so happy that Optimus was alive. Optimus and Starlight are happy, except for when chaos happens in the peaceful city. The Decepticons attack and Optimus has to fight Megatron and Black Sunshine again and barely lives. That's just my opinion. I just love a good tragedy. And I am a Decepticon person but this story was really good. I hope that I can get permission from you to use it in my stories when I reach the perfect spot.
Guest chapter 17 . 5/24/2014
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Guest chapter 17 . 5/4/2014
uhoh! bumblebee and star better split. i think optimus will always be grieving for rain.
Taeniaea chapter 17 . 1/13/2014
cool story
FanLovesFics16 chapter 15 . 5/20/2013
CONTINUE THE STORY!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Optimus' mate's name is Raindown? in which continuity is settled your FF?
You're Fan chapter 14 . 5/9/2013
Please I am on my knees begging you to continue. Please ppppplllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssseeee I need to know how it ends
FanLovesFics16 chapter 14 . 3/20/2013
Let there be more chapters please!
Sassyangracy chapter 14 . 3/10/2011
Finish this its really good! :D
202RumbleBee chapter 6 . 11/19/2009
bumblebee and star cuddleing? AW, thats so cute.
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