|Reviews for Baptism|
| Demon Vampire180 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
This was really powerful. The ending line was absolutely beautiful, as was the entire story. Amazing job.
| slashprincess16 chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
is it bad that i like this?
but this is really good... i wish you would continue it (but i know you probably wont)
but WOW part of me is screaming 'Go back to the leaf! Sakura will fix you up' and i HATE Sakura (sorry to people who like her) but yeah... this is REALLY good
| SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Wow..that was extremely disturbing, not to mention bizarrely believable. I could easily see Orochimaru doing something like this for a backup plan.
Sasuke's POV was written pin-point, I think.
And the whole thing was really, really well-written.
| AluminumMuse chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Wow. Intense. I like the description of what Sasuke imagines his baby might be.
| Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Wow. That was increasingly disturbing and horrific, and I loved it. It was well-written and had a perfect beginning and ending. Good job. _
These were my favorite parts:
He couldn’t, after all, allow himself to be responsible for giving life to such a monster, for bringing it into the world (as horrible as the world may be, there just isn't room for more atrocities).
It was a baptism of sorts, signifying something new, a firm and resilient no to a former lifestyle of pleases and don'ts and please don'ts.
A baptism drenched in blood.
| someone chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
That was awesome!
I didn't see the pregnancy comming at all!
keep it all
| DaniTemp chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Ooh, creepy :]
That is a really interesting one-shot, dun know if I can totally imagine the pregnancy xD
But that was pretty good. You should think about continuing it :]
It could turn into something interesting.