Reviews for Demon Eyes Naruto
Guest chapter 8 . 12/30/2014
Cgnnnbnbb
zeldawolffang chapter 9 . 10/12/2014
it's almost been a year are you not continuing? TT
yindragonkiba chapter 9 . 9/4/2014
Nice story
killer4853 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
like
Ballazan chapter 9 . 4/21/2014
Update this please!
Wrath Of The Heavens chapter 9 . 1/11/2014
...I'm going to be rude but this sorely needs to be rewritten.
Reasons:
Its physically impossible to be that stupid
The character bashing is overdone and unrealistic.
There's no subtlety at all. (Its Nin-Fiction)
The Hokage leads a group of ninja (He's Hokage because he's paranoid so how the hell did Zabuza and Haku just walk into the NINJA village?)
Leaders lead because they know politics, diplomacy or the art of assassination ergo Clan Heads/people in authority do not walk into blatant traps like that.
Tact please
Naruto seems to be revealing his secrets willy nilly (He did sign up to be a ninja, right?)
I am not saying all this to be a ass, this is my honest opinion but the fact is this is one of only three Samurai Eyes Kyo / Naruto Fanfiction crossovers on the internet (and the best of the three which is downright depressing) and it could be soooooo much better.
I ask you to consider my argument as I present it, as an honest desire to help someone to improve and not a flame.
kat12 chapter 9 . 1/10/2014
I think it's awesome and can u write more naruto and hinata
Dracoessa chapter 6 . 1/8/2014
Damn
Dracoessa chapter 5 . 1/8/2014
Oh kami, that's sweet!
Dracoessa chapter 4 . 1/8/2014
ROFLMFTO!
Dracoessa chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
Your ssssssssooooooooo grunked hiashi-baka no teme.
Dracoessa chapter 2 . 1/8/2014
How about an elegant mixture between a katana, and a rapier?
Draoessa chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Konoha, your sssssooooooo grunked if narotu turns against you.
acetwolf94 chapter 9 . 12/22/2013
I enjoyed reading this! ADD MORE PLEASE!
acetwolf94 chapter 5 . 12/22/2013
NICE! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
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