Reviews for Captured
DarkAngel6669 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
hope you finish this soon
kitsunegirl1212 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
D: That was it? Dammittttttt! I need more!3 *curious*
redlox2 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Pls update so he can finish the job!
citruschan chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
It was decent, there could have been better dialouge...

I'm positive no one would refer to Ulquiorra as "emo"

maybe "loner" or "pathetic" Ulquiorra only looks emo, he doesn't really have the persona of someone classified as emo, seeing how his aspect of death is Nihilism.

That's my only complaint, other than that it's alright. :)
lady3098209 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
:O sexy
wingsofseyfert12 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Nnoitra? Really, and here I thought the only ones who got love were Grimmjow/Ichigo and Byakuya. Nice seeing a Nnoitra fic. Spot on character for him.

Only gripe is the dialogue. One sentence per character cause if not then its hard to read.

Still, making an OC out of a friend of yours, couldn't you have been a bit more merciful and had your friend paired up with someone tamer like...Bykauya or something?
LadyFoxy chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Oh! This was quite graphic but still a sexy smut overall.

I don't want to sound like a perv but I want to read more of this LOL!

Job well done, I think you captured Nnoitra's brutal personality well!
Kamiko5 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010


BUT GOOD story:)
CU Administration chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I thought this was good dear ] a few things though

You should break the line after someone speaks. Like double spacing after diologue. Helps make it easier to read. Also quite often you did not use punctuation at the end of diologue. That is a must for proper grammar. Nnoitra was ooc a bit with how he talked but that isn't really a problem.

This is not a flame though! Don't be angry with me
Nnoifangirl5 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
oh wow this was so...omg i wanna read more! make a chapter two!
cottonsocks chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Nom, I love Nnoitra x OC stories! (OC whore here). Some yummy stuff here; keep it up ;D
Miko Hayashi chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
:o STRANGER DANGER! LMAO! nice work xD I wanna read more!
Blairbug1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
*snortsnort* xD Thank you Hana. I feel special. If you don't write chapter 2, I'll be very upset. Ahah. WRITE CHAPTER 2 AND MAKE IT JUST AS SEXY! D
Raylas chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Update this now i want to see what happens next!
ConfettiCannon chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
*blushes a thousand shades of red*

Ah... I really liked this story, you portrayed Nnoitra-kun very well~.

Keep up the good work :3

If it's possible, could you do one similar to this but with Szayel~?

You don't have to, it was just a thought
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