|Reviews for Kira vs Zero : Light vs Lelouch|
| Psiivmeodlqndndkcibiash chapter 7 . 12/29/2015
I believe if this fight actually happened than Lelouch would have won, because Lelouch would not need a death not in his perfect world of peace and refuse the power. Plus, if I was Lelouch I would just, haven already taken control over America's military might and discovered Kira is in Japan, have Japan nuked until it no longer existed. After all, this is a different dimension that did not matter to Lelouch. Also, Lelouch has already proven that he was willing to sacrifice others. Once, when he accidently used Geass on that one princess (can not remember her name) to kill all the Japanese people he took his mistake and used it to his advantage. He also showed his willingness to sacrifice when he abandoned his entire army for the sole purpose of saving Nunally. Surely, if he was willing to sacrifice his army and his plan to create peace for Just Nunally than he would be able to sacrifice Japan for not just Nunally, but Kallen and Suzaku also.
| Why just think chapter 7 . 11/14/2015
Lelouch does not need to say his name to make a command, he only does so for showmanship, he wouldnt use it on light, also people forget what happend when the geass is used on them so light wouldnt remember the name even if lelouch did say it.
Lelouch is a brilliant stratagist and incredibly smart (he has multiple times prerecorded one side to a convisation, once to a man who was good at minipulating people, the other with the smartest man he knew), there is Little chance that he would fall for the tip without major suspisions, why would someone tip if they are not seeking a reward (how could he not recognise the writing), how would light even know, also what stoped him from turning light into a slave?
Light also had a lot of suspisions that he had no reason to have eg. The geass only working once, all he knew was that lelouch had mind-control/hypnotism, no-one would think 'lets cheak if it works multiple times'.
Lelouch also at the end would of killed light straight up, leleuch new that power currupts and felt guilty for his past actions, the death note would of disgusted him, not tempted him.
I am not saying light is not smart, but he is not as smart as lelouch, afterall lelouch used his abilities to their full potential, if light was a little bit smarter he would of gotten the shinigami eyes and wrote his name in the notebook with his date of death 100 years in the future.
| Kain the vampire lord chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
Epic story! loved it,u potrayed the characters very nicely & the ending was pretty satisfactory too though i was hoping that Light would win.
| Sly chapter 7 . 9/7/2015
Not to be a fangirl or anything (I love both Light and Lelouch's characterss) but I think that based on the fact they were both done with their timeliness when this fanfic started it seems like Lelouch would have won, because no one can argue that Light cracked and went completely inssane at the end of Death Note. Other than that, great short sstory!
Ta ta for now!
| supersaiyangoku065768 chapter 7 . 7/9/2015
Most awesome fanfic EVER!
| DystopianKitKat chapter 7 . 5/24/2015
Nice story, but in my opinion, Lelouch definitely should've won. Lelouch was only rescued by C.C. because he was lacking in physical strength, not mental. He definitely wouldn't have gone and brainwashed the entire government (too easy to be found out) and he DEFINITELY wouldn't have fallen for Light's tricks so easily. We're talking about the man who has contingency plans for his five other contingency plans, he wouldn't have been found so easily.
| Fainfan chapter 7 . 4/6/2015
Wow exciting story!
But LL was abit dumb in my opinion
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/14/2014
Wow . . .
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
DAMMIT, JUST YESH OKAY? JUST YESH
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
| Akemi Homura-san chapter 7 . 8/1/2014
I am very sorry. I do not wish to be that guy, I really don't.
Light Yagami is a sociopath. Pure and simple. He cares for no one but himself because his brain renders him incapable of doing so. Lelouch is NOT. He is a genius of the highest calibre (who killed and absorbed GOD, by the way, not even counting the fact that he became immortal at the end of the show via the activation of his Code) and with a surprising amount of empathy. He will always roast Kira ALIVE because of that. The fact that your story says otherwise (and has C. C. acting so OOC) demonstrates a complete and total lack of understanding concerning three of the four characters involved. You only get a pass on Ryuk because in Death Note, he doesn't actually DO anything of note.
I apologize once again, but meeting two people within the space of 24 hours with NO concept of how human neuropsychology works makes me a bit irritable, and thus blunt. But what I say is objective truth; you have no concept of how these characters work, nor their motivations, and it REALLY shows.
| Princess Daenerys Targaryen chapter 7 . 6/21/2014
| Skywaters chapter 7 . 1/23/2014
Wow that was a really nice read. To be honest I was biased towards lelouch the entire time. I cheered at the times light got outwitted and sulked whenever lelouch fell for his traps. I dont think the mask would have been that easy to knock off though-its practically a helmet. But overall well done! It was an entertaining read and while it feels kinda... stale that it was a tie, I think it was a pretty good ending. I loved all the twists you put in it!
| 12tailedninja-demon chapter 7 . 7/25/2013
This was a great read. No bias in here, unlike with me, I would've made Light lose.
Then again... it's a tie... It's better that way, I suppose... there is no raving mad-person afterwards.
| 12tailedninja-demon chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
Uh, I believe that you broke the 23- day rule. You can't kill someone 24 days after writing his/ her name, it has to be 23 days later...
Unless, I'm wrong?