|Reviews for Hogwarts a ReWrite Part 1|
| PSay chapter 6 . 7/29
I'm so glad that Harry caught Ginny. Oliver and the rest of Gryffindor are so wrong to blame Harry and Ginny for losing the cup. Ginny's life was much more important. I'm glad Ginny understood that Harry didn't kiss Hermione. It is too bad Hermione was so angry. I hope they don't have a problem trying to return the jar to the cave. That boy did warn Harry not to go there again. Thanks for writing. pms
| PSay chapter 5 . 7/29
The jar is really effecting them and they don't realize it is bad. I'm glad Hermione figured out what the jar is. It is too bad she thinks Harry and Ginny don't like her. They do. It is really bad that Ginny heard what Malfoy said. Of course he lied but Ginny is not feeling very confident right now and took it wrong. Harry is going to have a really bad day. Thanks for writing. pms
| PSay chapter 4 . 7/28
This is scary. Touching the jar gives Harry and Ginny the ability to talk to each other telepathically. They won't want to give it up. I hope they don't manage to open the darn thing. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms
| PSay chapter 3 . 7/28
The prank was great but the consequences were not so great although the DADA teacher did let them off. Hermione is really too uptight. Dean was very cruel to her though. I'm glad Harry and Ginny went after her but into the forest is bad. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing. pms
| Teufel1987 chapter 12 . 7/27
Quote:Harry's face drooped as he remembered how unlucky Halloween had always been for him.:End Quote
I don't get it
While canon Harry did recognise that his parents died on a Halloween night, he was never sad or unhappy every single Halloween at Hogwarts. He used to even look forward to the celebrations!
And when you think about it, it makes sense
Till he reached Hogwarts he never knew when his parents died. On top of that the Dursleys did desensitise him to that.
And how was every Halloween till date unlucky for him?
He's had one Halloween that was unlucky.
Before Hogwarts it doesn't really count seeing as life was unlucky for him!
If it did then Christmas, Easter, New Years and every other holiday has always been unlucky for him.
| J. Jamie Dupane chapter 12 . 7/27
This is a brilliantly irritating cliff-hanger! Please update soon...
| scrappy8 chapter 12 . 7/26
| scrappy8 chapter 11 . 7/24
| Son of Whitebeard chapter 11 . 7/24
ooh love the angst nature towards burbage
| Son of Whitebeard chapter 10 . 7/24
nice to see political changes
| TheWiseGirl2106 chapter 10 . 7/23
Please update soon! I can't wait to see how the story develops! It's been really good, I like the Harry and Ginny being best friends spin!
| scrappy8 chapter 10 . 7/22
| FreelanceBum chapter 10 . 7/22
Dun dun dunnnnnnn
| FreelanceBum chapter 9 . 11/7/2014
I personally hate Ron, so I don't mind him not being in the story much. Although is more annoying here, as he is also whiny and a bad winner.
The characters occasionally feel a bit off, age wise, but are mostly ok. I'm still not sure about Devon, but that is a good sign really. It means he isn't dangerously Gary Stu,, and the crush on McG is amusing. I've always wanted a story where Harry hurts himself due to a crush on Poppy and wants to see her.
As for Blackthorn, it feels like a Harry Potter style plot, and I really can't wait to see where you are going with it.
So in other words, great story, hope you don't take forever to update. I mean I understand, but I still want to read more. :D
| FreelanceBum chapter 5 . 11/7/2014
"some very brutal pranks over the last few weeks. Most of which involved a part of his clothing catching fire."
That is more assault, less prank. I mean it is literally playing with fire.