Reviews for Fate
agilina1 chapter 1 . 17h
I really think that you should continue
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
i like the story because it ends with erik staying with zoey_ i
Edward's BackUp Girl chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
This is good! Even though I've been team Heath since Betrayed, I like to read different House of Night opinions. I think you'd be interested in Connected by Luna Sol Leil on Fanfiction. It is not an Erik story, but is indeed a Kalona story. If you don't favor Kalona that is okay, but I highly recomend you read it because this author writes just like the Casts. I have reason to believe that she is.
BRAZILAIN'S NAME chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
too impersonal and quick, kind of boring to, maybe you could write more and with more passion
ColossalSuperfluousColloquys chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Bleh! This was really boring. I didn't get the end part with Darius. So be more descriptive! I like the plot though...
1world-traveler chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
littlelimbo chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
I wanted that accident to happen the way it did in you fic!
Mrs.Dimitri Belikov chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
a bit too short. and i didn't know what was going on at first. but i loved the line oh and by the way i smell you all over her. this is not a flame i know i hate them too. just constructive critacism
Tumarishima chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
i like, but i am more one for more detail... but that is just me, verry good

life spins in and out of reality

some will survive

will you?
Elle chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
that was a very great fic. i wish there was more : )
WordsCantBringMeDown chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
i wish THAT had happened. u should write about Aphroditie (ignore spelling) and Darius.