Reviews for Traitors Among Us
TwilightJac1 chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Nice story. I have a few tips for you: try to slow the sory down and add more deails on what's happening (as I read I felt rushed) and try to combine paragraphs if in one someone says something and in the next it's someone's reactions or thought's combine them. It was good though so keep writing.
flowwitheverything chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Oh wow. this story is just like so groovy. I love the way that it is at a different house of night as well. How cool would it be to have a silver mark, it would be cool to have a cresent moon tatoo at all!