Reviews for The Early Days
spears16 chapter 2 . 6/13/2012
Mira Shio chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
"Miaka. That's Mee-Ack-A! Just don't ask me how to write it. I don't know."

Isn't that just the cutest line ever? But, one thing... "onee-san" is for older sisters. "Onii-san" is for older brothers. :)

And I like your writing style. Your grammar's good.