Reviews for Adult Arts
Anttolas chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
i say this story got a good potential to get really good, and will follow it from here on, and i tell ya ignore any flames that come your way this story is good at everything i think developing story, great spelling and an end to the first chapter that makes you wanna read more, so see ya next chapter:)
hordac85 chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
it up.

An extremly unique prespective.I would like to see where this don't stop writing this story.
Hael chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
You need to update this!
Mr. Ursine chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
I wanna ... I hope ... alright I have no idea what to say all I know is I want to say something. Like the story. Don't know why. Hope you make your deadline. Normally I'd say more, but I'm at a loss for words at the moment. Great Job and more reviews to ya.
LazyKid1 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
love the story and the paring
noshadowone chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
This will probably be a good story once it gets going. ill be looking out for it in the future. For the most part for not being beta'd there were not to many mistakes which should be commended. hopefully ill remember what this story is about in two months.
Jeph chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
all i can say is...WIN!
6623ninja chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Fic writer this is an interesting path that you have them on. Do you thing that you could continue this fic? Will naruto know that facts of life early or not, I think yes. Update soon please.
serhoth chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Love it so far. Look forward to reading more.
Zero Asakura chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I gotta admit this fic has lots of potential and is using a lot of it from the beginning

I ask you that you continue it

that's all i ask

Quality-wise it is very well done, and of couise thousands of times better done than i would have if i had had the idea

however unlikely that scenario, my english being poor and my birth language mostly broken

Thanks for writing, write more
Kadessor chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
nice, please continue soon if not sooner

c ya
trex3000 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I have several things going through my head right now. Oddly I sort of enjoyed the story and found it funny and werid, in a good way.

Many people may say that you are sick, but it isnt like you had naruto fuck her, more of you put him into a situation that will gain him some amount of love and attention.

There are several ways you can take this story and I cant wait to see what you do with it.

You use spell check and keep your paragraphs short, but not to short. Please give yourself a cookie.

I cant wait to see more and dont push yourself to get a longer or just as long chapter if you cant. Write it on your time, relax and have fun with it. You have a great story to be made so keep it up.

till next time

CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Wow that is what I call a MILF.
Ken-Son4Hitokiri chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
that was really good i cant wai to read the next chapter!
DrakeHouse chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I'm scared to admit this wins..The internets strike again! T_T I'll forever be a shipper of Tsume and kid Naruto..shame on thee!
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