Reviews for Adult Arts
g-b610 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
wow, this is a great story. Definitely not an idea that I have come across before.
Brim Wraith chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
interesting, very very interesting...I like it. A good smart Naruto fic that doesn't make him TOO smart. Please continue!
kokuryu-oh chapter 1 . 6/26/2009

Tsume and 6th year Naruto?

She haven't overcome her infatuation with Minato, yet?

how this lucky brat sneak to clan compound? Clan head house man?

how they handle the security, if 6th year old boy able to penetrate their compound?
Lord Zander chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Nice story, glad someoen is actualyl writing a story with this pairing keep it up.
buddhabro2 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Awesome story I was a little creeped out by the hair on the feet but still good story keep it up and also watch out for the mistakes viagra and jerking off is for guys not women.
Gefallenen Engel chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I would really love to read some more of this.
Odin's Scribe chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
This is an interesting concept. Spelling and grammer is decent, but the dialogue is kinda awkward. It doesn't sound natural.

Still, I look forward to the next installment.
BlkDragon112 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Now that's a good story, Tsume is funny as hell. hope you update soon and the story goes for a long time
Aldo Montoya chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
You have just got yourself a reader. Love the idea that you have here and love the pairing, hoping this does NOT turn into a harem, and it stays as a Naruto/Tsume story. Hope for more soon.
Mike chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Awesome! Totally Hilarious!
OffhandScribe chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Um, what? I don't know what to say... this is simaltaneously the sexy thing I've read recently as well as being f'ing hilarious. I am sorry I haven't put much thought into this review, but I think I'm still in shock.

Just wow all around, looking forward to more.

lindon2 chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
good fic
Dragoon Of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
GOod story so far. kind of funny as well trying tell six year old about sex. i hope you update soon before augustd 26th. There needs be more TsumexNaruto stories
FateBurn chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
interesting story.
Lazarian chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH... ...heheh...damn. that situation was awkward and funny as hell. is this going to like, novel length or something or was just supposed to be a one-shot? like the idea though i'm wondering exactly what hanna and kiba would think if they found out about this later on in their lives. By the way, does Tsume know that naruto is minato's son?
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