Reviews for Blue Devils
Edhla chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Disclaimer: I know this is three years old, but... Reviews Revolution. They're the rules. You read something, you have to review no matter how old it is. :)

This is a nice concept for a poem, and you have some good lines here. I thought that "the blue devils" every second line was a bit too much, though- perhaps you could put that line at the beginning and the end instead? I'd be interested to see what you could make of this poem three years on. Good luck, in any case :)