Reviews for Inheritance |
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![]() ![]() Very nice ending and very unexpected. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My fave chapter :D (which I said already but oh well xD) Freida is so...awesome xD really, i would be her best friend xD And Firenze was parfait :D This whole thing was! I am so sad its over ;_; NEED MOAR ALL-SUE :D Oh, and most importantly. Well done for finishing your first fanfic in years! Keep it up :D -round of applause and cake for all :D- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow great cliffhanger ending! You are very good at keeping faithful to the original series. Can't wait to read the rest. If you get time, can you review the next few chapters of mine too? |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it a dragon and you siad it wwas a qween basilisk |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! soryy this isn't a longer rewiew but I couln't find anything to say... Great work thougt! And she's definitely not a mary sue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() VE~~ Epic flashbacks ahoy! I've already said this before but thank god you don't do traditional italics flashbacks xD And I do loved the begining where Harry's just like 'lulz wut?' xD And I'm glad you improved my emo bit at the end xD It wasn't my best...what being like 11 at night XD and then they remember the egg after a nice little heart to heart :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The next chapter is the last? Oh. Really? Oddly short, but you've written a really nice story, so I can't complain. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! D This is an amazing story and your next chapter better be long! It's not that long of a story and I'm hooked! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I don't want the next chapter to be that last one! I love reading your story! Jaden Ruth |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are an great author! And I really can't wait to see what Harry will do to her when she tells him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good original character. Yay it's been a while since I've seen one of those. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops, I'm a bit late with the review xD Sowwy DX Anyways, I do love this whole chapter really, the begining's funny and ominous at the same time, the middles got all the action and the end is a real nail biter as she tells Harry (who can back off ma home girl btw! xD) and its all pulled together with true Alli-sue epicness :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() its really good. i like it! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really really upset because I just realized something - I won't be able to read the last chapter until Monday evening. I won't have internet access after 11 am on Thursday. :( You keep surprising me with how good this is. You're right, Voldemort-had-a-child fics do tend to be awful. This is definitely not a standard Voldemort-had-a-child fic. I can't wait to find out how it turns out! |
![]() ![]() I really adore this story that you've created. Good work. |