|Reviews for Wicked|
| padrrhhajfenmak chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
U HAV 2 UPDATE NOW, OR I WILL HUNT U DOWN AND KILL U!
the story was really good!
u need 2 update though.
i also wrote a story 4 wicked and gakuen alice.
i am absolutly ubsessed w/ gakuen alice and wicked!
the r da best!
please update! : )
| Corvus corone chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
I love Wicked and I love Gakuen Alice so what can I say? *starts singing Defying Gravity* (I am going to see Wicked in London in a few months, and I am still spazzily hyper about it! Just another four months...)
Anyway! Critique time:
~ This seems to be not so much a crossover but just Wicked with the names changed. I... don't really see the point. If it were set in the land of Oz or in Shiz or something, but with the characters of Gakuen Alice still perfectly in character, then that would be a crossover. The point of a crossover is to see how characters would react when put into a new universe, or how things would go if characters from one universe had the personalities of characters from another, etc. This seems to... not be a fic. Just putting the exact words of Wicked into Sumire's mouth does not automatically produce a fanfic.
~ a very very short chapter...
~ Grammar problems - there should be a comma at the end of every speech phrase thingy (I forget the technical term), as well as a new paragraph for every new person talking.