|Reviews for Failure to Thrive|
| Francium chapter 21 . 9/8
This is rape. Bella raped Edward. He did not provide consent. There is so much toxic masculinity and sexism in the story but I let it go cause it’s just fanfiction. But this is disgusting. I’m disgusted. Stop normalizing the idea that women can’t rape men.
| quisha1991 chapter 7 . 7/21
I just love these two! Especially Bella
| marysix chapter 27 . 7/7
I loved this story! It was so much better even than I expected. Their emotional and physical journeys were so interesting (and hot). Their internal dialogues were so cute. I just loved how they figured everything out. It had nice little surprises and points they had to deal with without getting actually angsty. Just loved it.
| Dreamcreaters chapter 1 . 6/1
A reading that contains everything.
Hot Lemons and humor that make you dubbed over, and a really good storyline
| A Sirius Individual chapter 21 . 2/25
lol, "it's sex not a rocket launch." right dou, real talk.
| Hmmmmm 2 chapter 27 . 2/16
I don't want to, cuz I LOVED this story, but I have to second that statement- that first time did seem quite rapey
| Hmmmm chapter 21 . 7/29/2017
So are we all gonna pretend Bella didn't just rape Edward?
| twirob chapter 27 . 7/26/2017
thanks so much for completing this AMAZINGLY! AWESOME! story for us ;D
| princeselisa chapter 27 . 7/4/2017
I really loved this story!
| hohi.rose chapter 6 . 6/27/2017
Im not a good reviewer but since you insisted.. just wanted to let you know that im loving your story so far, its so fun to read so thank you for sharing
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/18/2017
This was a GREAT STORY! thanks so much! one good thing about coming to the Twi-verse late (I didn't start reading the books until April of '14, tho' I seriously considered it a full year earlier), most of these stories are as finished as they will get before I even start 'em.
| Guest chapter 24 . 6/18/2017
And, if memory serves, McGuyver handled the bad guys with his BRAINS not guns! I think he was the original Sexy Nerd-you know the actor, in his pre-McGuyver days, played Jeff Webber, Super-Hunk Doc on General Hospital!
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/18/2017
I just did a "raise the roof" gesture because I guessed correctly about the "greatest store on Earth". It takes so LITTLE to make me happy! thanks.
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/17/2017
Oh my goodness! Did you have a premonition when you wrote this that Trump would one day be a totally HATED politician years later? I just want to share his hair right off his head!
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/17/2017
Yes! for GOD'S SAKE someone tell me why a man thinks his BALLS are going to rot and FREAKIN'' fall OFF, if he admits to the Heinous SIN of GIGGLING!? I just thought it was MY husband whose "laugh terminology" was so ANALLY (as in RETENTIVE!) gender specific!