Reviews for Failure to Thrive
orchidluv chapter 27 . 4/17
This was awesome all the way to the end. I love it. However, the outtake chapter you had Edward calling himself Cullen. Whoops! Thank you!
orchidluv chapter 16 . 4/15
I really love the back and forth in this story. Learning a bit about each of them slowly and in more detail each time. Traveling back a few moments or hours as the case may be sometimes, to make sure we know exactly what's going on. Loving this.
Guest chapter 27 . 4/15
I keep checking back to see if you have returned to writing here. I enjoyed this story and your writing.
Guest chapter 27 . 4/15
A great HEA! Thanks for this.
orchidluv chapter 8 . 4/14
Haha I love Alice
Guest chapter 16 . 4/14
Your characterization of these two is quite enjoyable and a bit original. Enjoying this journey...
Guest chapter 14 . 4/14
I love your creative cursing from Bella!
agoogoo chapter 6 . 4/5
So. Having your father figure as your sex therapist? Awkward?
bella0609 chapter 6 . 1/22
Loved the flowers :) They are so cute! Can't wait to meet Alice!
bella0609 chapter 5 . 1/22
Poor Bella - James is nasty! Her Mother isn't that much better! Not speaking to her! No wonder she is having a hard time functioning! Edward seems to be having a difficult time...
bella0609 chapter 4 . 1/22
So glad Edward told Bella now instead of later!
bella0609 chapter 3 . 1/22
I think Bella is making great strides!
Ninkita chapter 27 . 1/14
Lol... it was a really enjoyable story. Thanks for writing ;)
Ninkita chapter 20 . 1/13
Hehe these two are hilarious and cute
Ninkita chapter 18 . 1/11
So much fun! Emmett is a really great character in this story :)
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