|Reviews for Failure to Thrive|
| jlcummins chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
I am really digging this fresh, original stuff. I can't wait to hear more about his condition. I was surprised at how quickly OpMBC came to fruition :) The boy indeed has got game!
| Hockey-Girl32 chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
love this story!
very odd in parts but i love it!
please update soon!
| delilah69 chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
i loved it! its really funny too!
| cjtwilight chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
Wow, great job! I can't wait to read more.
| g8r gal chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
You stopped there? Dang it! I was looking forward to the book reading and the sleepover. Such a tease!
| LskNH chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
| An anonymous person chapter 7 . 7/11/2009
Yeah i'll probably comment on your work a million times. You are officially the awesomest fanfiction writer i have ever seen and i have litterally stayed up untill 4:03AM to read this story and it's fricken awesome. You better write more cuz i have to wake up in 3 keep writing!
| sshhs10 chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)
| shadowXxxnightfoxx chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
por edward and bella and I so fell in love with this stroy when I clicked on it for the first time
| Areallthegoodusernamestaken chapter 14 . 7/10/2009
This story is so awesome! You are a great writer and have such a way with words I can't even tell you don't know what you are talking about. Thanks in advance for the next chapter and for giving me something to fill my Edward and Bellaless days with! :D
| MissRe chapter 14 . 7/10/2009
I liked it, but then I can normally ignore paradoxes in the space time continuum. LOL Awesome job. I love that Edward got all pissy and protective. It's awesome that they are spending the night together again and that they are both so eager to spend time together. Love that Bella was able to take things into her own hands. Loved it!
| RissaCullen-TeamEdward chapter 7 . 7/10/2009
i thought the dream was very... interesting... in a kinda sorta good way... i was trying to keep up with who was talking, and bella's subconciousness babbling to herself. got kinda confused, but it was hilarious anyways!
| Aleeab4u chapter 14 . 7/10/2009
Sorry, I have to disagree. There is no possible way that even the most amazing review in the world could ever be "almost as good as being shipwrecked with Edward in paradise." Unless Edward is a sparkly vampire and there is neither wild life nor sun block on said paradise. Because then you'd be sunburned - sparklies are reflective after all - and eventually dinner. So then yes, reviews would be "almost" as good. Still, only "almost" because seriously, what a way to go, lol.
Now, what is "almost as good" is this chapter! Oh my. I never thought I would say this but the bbz was HOT. (looks around furtively and hopes no one I know is reading this *blushes*) And you have the female equivalent of big cajones and oodles of lovely writing talent for pulling that one off. Uh, no pun intended, lol.
Yay for girl power and knowing how to please ones-self! Yay for Alice's rabbit gift, every girl should have one. Darn, why don't I have one! And finally the biggest Yay for you. I loved every element of this chapter. Bella's 'success', her loser deterrent, Edward's protectiveness and even the slightly cliffhanger ending. Can't wait for more.
| cusic1981 chapter 14 . 7/10/2009
I really loved Bella's inner monologue and the text between her and Alice was very funny.
| jadesabre75 chapter 14 . 7/10/2009