Reviews for Failure to Thrive
Shadowdragon13 chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
I just found your story this afternoon and I'm totally hooked. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Meg chapter 6 . 7/7/2009
I really like the word "Fuckerdicker" and I like Bridgett Jones and I liked the Flowers and their meanings.

You are such a perv, by the way!

I am onto chap 6, am really enjoying reading this little racy story.
acw1 chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
great chapter. I bet she and alice will have quite the chat. i'm am glad he will eventually open the candy store to her. looking forward to more.
lilaya chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
Sorry that I haven't reviewed on the last few chapters! I didn't get a chance, but they were all great, as always! I love that Edward has those little acronyms and that they ha a 'sleepover'. I also love how you've still been able to keep the Edward angst/self-loathing personality trait, even though they're still human.

Great chapter!
squawkbx chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
I really do love this story, you make me smile thank you
Via chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
Another awesome chapter. After school specials were the worse...and yet when you were extremely bored you watched them while commenting the whole time on how stupid they were. Anyways update soon!
bacmel79 chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
I will have to totally agree with Edward about the syrup. YUM eggs/bacon/sausage. I think syrup makes almost all breakfast foods taste better. LOL! However with my eggs I draw the line at syrup, nothing else can touch my eggs, not even cheese. LOL!

I will have to sadly say that I even had to watch those After school specials in school.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
LskNH chapter 12 . 7/7/2009
Acinadisme chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
Operation MBC is a success! So now is it time to help poor sweet vulnerable Edward? why do i have the feeling he's going to be even more vulnerable now that he feels bella is fixed' and he's still broken? Wonderful job.
benna chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
Pretty good there, and you were worried that you wouldn't be able write a good well done. Can't wait for more.
delilah69 chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
so great! is he going to do something stupid and almost or totally lose her? this is so great!
Aleeab4u chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
Latin has to be the sexiest language ever and having Edward speak it has just made it sexier, lol. Great chapter. Operation MBC success was very hot and sexy, but you managed to make it sweet and loving as well.
hayleyhoo chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
wo someone get me a fan that was hot lmao :D I loved the chapter as usual :)
Via chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
Very realistic! Please update soon and keep up the great work!
acw1 chapter 11 . 7/6/2009
what a great boyfriend! great chapter. looking forward to more edward and bella, thriving together. I know this was just a start but it was definitely a step in the right direction.
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