|Reviews for Failure to Thrive|
| Halo221 chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
Originally it seemed like Bella was more screwed up, but idk, I'm thinking maybe Ed's the one who's gonna have the harder time (no pun intended, I swear!)
| Halo221 chapter 3 . 12/20/2012
Aww, they're so cute! And screwed - figuratively for now, but literally soon enough I'm sure ;)
| Halo221 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Holy shit, I looked up Georgia O'Keeffe's work (some of which I'd seen before) and I kinda feel like an idiot for missing it! An interesting start to an intriguing concept!
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
This is just the kind of story I like, witty, good dialogue, slight angst, and, thank the literary gods, good grammar.
| Jaygm chapter 27 . 12/6/2012
Well, you did very well with this. I am glad I didn't have to wait for it to finish over a few years, though. This is one of those that is going to be read again. It is just that good. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work.
| Jaygm chapter 25 . 12/6/2012
Ahh, Jessica sounded like a real bitch. Feminism or no- she's just a bitch.
| Jaygm chapter 23 . 12/6/2012
His sex embargo was going a bit too far, I think. LOL. But now. . .
| Jaygm chapter 18 . 12/4/2012
Another great chapter- punishment novels - lighter fluid and a fire pit. LOL.
You are such a delightful storyteller. Can't tell you that enough!
| Jaygm chapter 17 . 12/4/2012
I will say it again- amazing writer- equally amazing story! Just love this.
| Jaygm chapter 16 . 12/4/2012
Oh yes, the Emmett scene will be hilarious.
| Jaygm chapter 15 . 12/4/2012
What an incredible chapter. You rocked it, baby!
| Jaygm chapter 11 . 12/4/2012
Such sweetness- finally for her.
| Jaygm chapter 9 . 12/3/2012
Your grasp of the English language is amazing. This story is too.
| Jaygm chapter 8 . 12/3/2012
Still loving this story. It is so well-written. You have talent for telling a tale.
| Jaygm chapter 6 . 12/3/2012
Very well-written story. Love the characters and the subtle humor.