Reviews for Inhibitions
Energetic Anomaly chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
I like drunken Daine, you should do a story where Numair gets drunk alongside her! That would be hilarious!
Anonymous chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Great story
yay chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
"Thayet took George, while nearby Onua, Sarge, Raoul, and Gary each clasped large mugs of mead and were laughing loudly at someone's joke." Doesn't Raoul not drink?
This was pretty funny.
AnneSilverfire chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Awwwwwwwwww :) sorry my comments are getting more mindless as we progress. I'm truly awful at writing these. However, I enjoy a drunk Daine and I really thought the part where Numair tells George he's got the wrong girl is awfully funny. :)
this SHIP of FOOLS chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I loved this. Well, Daine... Just don't get drunk again please? ;)
HazelRQ chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
So good!

I can't believe you always leave us hanging at the end like that! [Iwantmore]
TkMomijiOXkisaHiro chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
nice ending.
Lena xo chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
AWWWWW that was sooooo cuteeee! :) And Numair's point of view is good, there's too much Daine :P Well, ok, not too much Daine, just not enough Numair

Hilarious and adorable!


Lena xo
Gweniveve Skyes chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
You made Daine drunk? Oh this has to be good lol. I liked it a lot. The Immortals and the Song of the Lioness are my favorite quartets from Tamora Pierce... she writes about such strong willed women, not some fair maiden in distress... but any ways. I thought it was cute, especially imaging Daine drunk and Numair being a total gentleman (which I can totally see btw) I liked it a lot! XD

SerenShadow chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
That was sweet, but I am disappointed that it ended...I don't know, but I just feel like there should be more to the story.

Terrific writing! ;)

Verasque chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
A sweet, well-written fic. It was lovely.
Devilishduck chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Wah! The description in this was just AWESOME!

The piece totally came to life :D
math music reading chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
That was beautiful. I really can't describe this fic but thank you for keeping Numair noble and in character.
JazziesxXxBabe chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
I like it I like it A lot!
bimmy 608 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
So when I was eleven or twelve or so, I read The Immortals. Actually, I think it might have been earlier than that. And now, because I'm ever so talentlessly bored, I'm reading it again for nostalgia's sake.

Point of that is, Daine/Numair was probably the first thing I ever "shipped", and reviving that was enough to get me back to this site in search of more. I guess I thought I wanted lusty, passionate head-over-heels scenes, or something, but I always forget how rewarding subtlety can be.

Point of that is, what I really wanted was this, through and through. There's something just so perfect about it - it's what -doesn't- happen, I think, that makes it perfect. Telling through not telling, and all that.

In any case, there are far too few reviews on such a wonderful piece, so I thought I'd add an especially long one. And I have to say, this is the most touched I've been by a piece of writing (especially fanfiction!) in a while. :0
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