Reviews for Everybody's Doll
SomebodySaveMe1998 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This story doesn't seem finished, it seems more like a prologue for a multi chapter story. I hope you do turn this into a full out story, if not would you mind if I use this as a prologue and turn it into a full out story? You could give your input on each chapter of the story if it makes it any better.
TwiFox chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
loved it keep writing
Ilovecherrypie chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
I would love to read more of this great one-shot
Lady Lily of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Oh, very interesting story indeed. ;D I really want to know what happens next. :D

*Lady Lily of Darkness*
YaNeverKnow21 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
I really like this, it is an amazing start
Agent Bella chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I really like this idea. You should continue it, you know.

- AB
cblols chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
thats really good i think you should do more
bite-me-cullen.just-do-it0304 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
you should continue!
VeryRachelBerry chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
"A little thing called angst, mother."

I love that line! Great story :)

I'd love it if you continued it ;)
Breanne Marie chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
ExpletiveExpert chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
Interesting plot... I like it, can't wait for you to continue it :)
AliceCullen499 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I'm reviewing and I think you should keep going I wouldn't mind knowing what happens while their gone and together.
WhiteLotus95 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Please continue this story! I love it so far!
Miss Silent Soldier chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
awesome oneshot it would kool if u made a story but still like it how it is
amyylasee chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Oh i can not wait for this 1 to be continued!(:

update please and thankyouu,

Amiiee x x x
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