Reviews for You're Ours
elusivemuse chapter 16 . 9/21
Hey, I've been following this story for a few years and still love it today as I did back then. I look forward to your next update and just wanted to let you know people are still reading this xx
Jordin chapter 1 . 7/13
Oh by the way (if you're even gonna see this) I just wanted to say I have an error I made in my review. I said "this chapter is bad like you're making it seem" but meant "this chapter is NOT bad like you're making it seem" sorry if you saw that and got sad, didn't mean it like that :)
Jordin chapter 7 . 7/11
Please continue! I still love this ship (Daniel/all Cobras) I hope you can continue! This story is bad like you're making it seem. If you don't have any ideas than I can help you come up with some:)
DuckieLuver chapter 16 . 12/31/2016
Ok, I know it's been like, 4 years since you updated this, and you probably don't even have this email address anymore by I have to tell you this. I've been reading this story for years thinking it was a one shot. I never realized there was more! But you left it in such a cliff hanger! Like, the real smut was just about to start! If you can find it in the bottom of your heart to finish this, I would be most grateful
Hari Datenshi chapter 8 . 11/14/2016
Hi! My Name is Hari Datenshi (only online) but call Shan(real nickname). I...
1) between 17-21
2) between 20-40s
3) possible bi? ( I just like people) and yes (i'm female by the way)
4) my mom
5) Johnny (dom blonde and uke Hispanic, yum!) and threesome: them and tommy/billy
6) looked up another author's faves and saw this story
7) Daniel getting molested in front of the other corbas, it set the mood for ideas for this story, answer from before, yup
8)Ali's pov ( she always annoyed me for allowing johnny to kiss without slapping him)
9)Assorted Pleasures (Fright Night 2011), multi-chapter stories from Takara Phoenix (percy Jackson and...)(you can get ideas from her most definitely, she has kinky stories)
Guest chapter 16 . 10/24/2016
update please
Kris chapter 16 . 8/15/2016
Um...more? Please? When will we ever get more?
ViolaTheGlaceon chapter 16 . 6/23/2016
Please update~
I was also wondering if Daniel could have 4 overprotective cousins. Oldest, Wyatt, the motherly, crazy protective one. Frank, the second oldest and the tallest; he is quiet and stony. The final two are twins, Felix and Tom. They are goofy, play pranks, and all the siblings are overprotective of Daniel. It might be fun if the met the Cobra boys~
Guest chapter 12 . 6/1/2016
I know this is late but... Can you please make a similar story for the new Karate Kid? Yes, that movie came out almost 6 years ago but it would be cool if you wrote one.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/29/2016
Please please please please update update update! I LOVE THIS STORY!
xcoolstorybro chapter 5 . 1/30/2016
favorite pairing is bobby/daniel or tommy/daniel tbh! also i think jimmy should be the one who is not interested in daniel however later he starts to be but he tries not to show it but he ends up getting shy and stuff around him and everything (he goes tsundere) lol. awesome, i know you have not updated in forever but pleaaase do!
xcoolstorybro chapter 2 . 1/30/2016
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! Best fanfiction i have ever read in my life. Don't listen to that other hater in the reviews, they're stupid as frick! DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS NOW PLEASE️
AryaStark55 chapter 16 . 9/8/2015
private chapter 16 . 8/13/2015
This is an excellent story! I think you do a very good job of developing the plot. You also nicely show how the Cobras might be a bit lonely. Overall, excellent work. Please update!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/24/2015
This is the stupidest piece of shit story I've ever read. It is basically rape masquerading as smut.
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