Reviews for The Lost Pretend
Moi chapter 10 . 7/12
Intriguing, but too short and with no 'real' ending. Adding detail would help improve your story as well, as it would create more of an atmosphere.
It works as something of a story outline though.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/4/2014
Great story!
lazybum89 chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
This is a great story! I'm interested to read more! :-)
ERIK chapter 10 . 5/30/2013
A great story.
dreameralways chapter 9 . 12/8/2012
Still need more!
Duchess67 chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
THIS was a really cool short bit. I liked it! *vbg*
KaeKaeD chapter 10 . 1/11/2011
This is complete? It just ends. I was really looking forward to reading it
BizzyLizzy chapter 10 . 8/23/2010
Brilliant - it's a great mix of the two story lines. Would love to read more of this.
dreameralways chapter 10 . 8/21/2010
Very entertaining. I hope that you come back to this. It's a lot of fun.
BillieBog chapter 10 . 8/15/2010
Would love to see more. At present, SGA is about my fav universe, and I have loved Pretender since it originally aired. Definitely not enough good Pretender fic out here.

Thanks so much,

Morrolan chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
So glad you've continued this. More please?
Dreamer22 chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
interesting story so far, I look forward to seeing more! with hopefully a slightly longer chapter
Bobboky chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
joniskpelare chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
I was a little surprise at Elizabeth because she's started the slippery slope, but then as the show went on, she made other desissions like that. At least they have John watching their back.
trecebo chapter 10 . 8/10/2010
Glad to see more of this little gem, but sadly not satisfied with the end at chapter 10. I like the discussion, and especially John's insight. More along that line would be great, unless thy muse has decreed no more?
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