Reviews for The Forgiving Sea
LastRedAppleStanding chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
PLEASE you have to do a sequel to this. You have to !
sweetes forbiden candy apple chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Absolutely beautiful like that movie Romeo & Juliet. I'm in the verge of tears.
twilighttown chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
loved it!
Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
I would love to read more of this story. Please think about adding more.
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
great story!
this city's just cemeteries chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
That was amazing! I loved it. [:

So, does he end up going back? :P
Jmaddie15 chapter 2 . 8/23/2009
this story is so good! i hope you update soon!
Confused55 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Wow great job! you should add on to this!-Aarica.
feathers.x.and.x.Edward chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
i really like it, but i think it would be even better if you held off on the lemon, and cut off there. then you could show how much time passed, and then edward comes back and then *poof!* lemon at the end. :D
jktwi chapter 2 . 8/6/2009
omg amazing you should really continue this its it!
skyisthelimit chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I love it! Really, it was great. The only flaw was that, well, back in the American Revolution, everyone had what we call today 'English accents', because that was the only kind of english back then.

But other than that, you really were accurate with the musketry and the battles and all that!
cullenized14 chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
it's a lovely one-shot. i hope you could continue it into a full-length story. :)
ElectricLimeGreen chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Wow, really nice story. Thank you!
KrittleTwilighted chapter 2 . 7/29/2009
I really liked this story and it would make a great longer story.
LittleMoCullen chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
WOW! That was good... very good... so what happend? He comes back right? I hope so.
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