|Reviews for The Forgiving Sea|
| kneon chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Great story, I sure hope you plan to continue after the contest. You have a great start.
| mangocider chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
it seems that edward always leaves in your stories but i enjoyed it anyways totally thinking this should become a story
| TopazHeart chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Is that it? Seriously? Did he come back? Did she wait? Oh, did she get pregnant? Ack...
| Love-RiniBell-Love chapter 2 . 7/28/2009
Liked the story. I hope Bella and Edward can be together in the end.
| Sunfeathers chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Lovely one-shot - would make a fabulous full-length story! :)
| GetMeOffThisCrazyThing chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
That was so good, but so sad!
He better come back and soon!
| jennayg123 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
It's very upsetting that we can't vote for this one because it is amazing! Are you going to continue the story?
| Till2NiteDoUsPart chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
can you maybe continue this? after the competition of course... i just want to see what happens after. does he come back? do their families accept their love? bellas father i doubt would take it very well...
please continue it... )
| loca37 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
This was great.
Do you have plans to continue it?
| titanica94 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
I liked this one-shot but I'm confused. Is it the American Revolution or the Civil War? Because I can't remember if the British Navy was particularly involved during the civil war, but if so the Yankees hated them then too because they were on the South's side. For that the American Revolution makes more sense, but the Red Cross didn't exist until after the Civil War, nor had Samuel Coleridge written "Rime of the Ancient Mariner" yet.
| Twilighterheart xxxx chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
i love it :) cryed at the end :(
| TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Aw, that's just mean! So, does Edward make it back? What happens to Bella while Edward is away? Back then, didn't they still have arranged marriages? So, Bella may not be able to wait... I hope you'll continue this after the contest is over!
| Krystinna chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
I just wanted to let you know that I love this story. I know its an "Age of Edward" entry, but I believe, and maybe I'm the only one, that you should turn it into a story. Or write something to follow up this chapter, perhaps them meeting again, or something of the likes. Its wonderfully written, and a beautiful idea.
| JulyRose chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I really like this one. I'm curious to see this one turn into a story someday. That would be Sweetish,
3 JR 3
| llkdjei77 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I loved it! I'm jumping on the bandwagon to ask for more from this story. I feel a need to know what will happen to them. I love this period in history, so I have a soft spot there.